请教GWD-6-Q22

nannan1202

GWD6-Q22:

Charles Lindbergh, for his attempt at a solo transatlantic flight, was very reluctant to have any extra weight on his plane, he therefore refused to carry even a pound of mail, despite being offered $1,000 to do so.

 

A.      Charles Lindbergh, for his attempt at a solo transatlantic flight, was very reluctant to have any extra weight on his plane, he therefore

B.      When Charles Lindbergh was attempting his solo transatlantic flight, being very reluctant to have any extra weight on his plane, he

C.      Since he was very reluctant to carry any extra weight on his plane when he was attempting his solo transatlantic flight, so Charles Lindbergh

D.      Being very reluctant to carry any extra weight on his plane when he attempted his solo transatlantic flight was the reason that Charles Lindbergh

E.       Very reluctant to have any extra weight on his plane when he attempted his solo transatlantic flight, Charles Lindbergh

觉得E没错，但是不知道A哪里错了？

Zeldaw

两个独立句子之间不能没有连词，therefore是副词，不能连接两个句子。

nannan1202

感激~~我居然不知道therefore是副词！！我说为什么没有人问这道题呢~~~

谢谢！！！谢谢！！

ericwong8768

请问下B为什么不对呢?

ericwong8768

难道是因为be attempting?

mchome

以下是引用ericwong8768在2009-4-15 10:54:00的发言：
请问下B为什么不对呢?

同问

cuishang11

B中分词作修饰状语出现在句中容易出现歧义 并且句首就是连续两个状语的叠加 表达混乱 

hionekg

A错在哪里？？？                                                

china101

我想问d错在哪里，我们都知道了being这样用是可以的，当然这题我也选的e，是因为我读着更顺。但从语法来说，我觉得d也没有问题啊~~

msuzengli

以下是引用china101在2009-6-25 17:59:00的发言：
我想问d错在哪里，我们都知道了being这样用是可以的，当然这题我也选的e，是因为我读着更顺。但从语法来说，我觉得d也没有问题啊~~

D把原句的结构整个改掉了(主语从人变成事了), 使得重心和句意都变了.

还有那个being relucant, 貌似没有逻辑主语.