OG11-46新问题

diawpfm

 

46. To Josephine Baker, Paris was her home long
   before it was fashionable to be an expatriate, and she remained in France during the Second World War as a performer and an intelligence agent for the Resistance.

(A)      To Josephine Baker, Paris was her home long before it was fashionable to be an expatriate

(B)      For Josephine Baker, long before it was fashionable to be an expatriate, Paris was her home

(C)     Josephine Baker made Paris her home long before to be an expatriate was fashionable

(D)     Long before it was fashionable to be an expatriate, Josephine Baker made Paris her home

(E)      Long before it was fashionable being an expatriate, Paris was home to Josephine Baker

 

 

OG中，对A.B的错误有这两条：

A.  To Josephine Baker ... her is redundant and awkward;

B       For Josephine Baker ... her is redundant and awkward;

 

为什么这个是多余，并且是awkward. 那么正确的形式是什么样的？？

谢谢了

liu4949

to和for用了会让人困惑，for 为了？对于？

diawpfm

ls说的我还是不太明白。。。。

OG说redundant和awkward，的依据  分别   是什么？

liu4949

以下是引用diawpfm在2008-9-13 21:05:00的发言：

ls说的我还是不太明白。。。。

OG说redundant和awkward，的依据  分别   是什么？

这么说，同样一个句子，你读了以后理解的句意和我理解的句意不同，这个句子就不好，for这个词你觉得是对于，但我觉得是为了，那是不是就对作者真正要表达的意思有影响？！作者写东西是为了表达他的意思，我和你出现了对意思的分歧，这个句子就不阿

还有，主语前面一般只有一个修饰部分，AB有出现了两个修饰部分，也就是两个逗号，基本上没有正确选项能是这个结构

[此贴子已经被作者于2008-9-13 21:13:53编辑过]

winbie

up up

iamwuyan

REDUNDANT主要是与后面的HER重了吧

diawpfm

iamwuyan

谢谢谢谢，明白了：）

sabriye

楼主问的问题，我还是不明白，是不是说前面是to sb/for sb,的后面也有所指代的这个人，这样的用法就是错呢？？？？D  的错误我也不太明白，麻烦好心人给偶讲讲，先谢谢了~~

lpdeng

我理解的是  To/for Josephine Baker  已经表示了her (home)的含义。 举个例：

To me, beijing is home.   对我来说北京就是家
To me, beijing is my home. 对我来说北京就是我家

上面两句话表示的意思一样，那第二句的my是不是多余了呢？