我觉得还是A好些吧, 与E的比较:concerning whether obesity is a biological disorder posing serious health risks or it is a condition more related to appearance than 首先,“it is”没必要再重复了吧,已经很明确了 然后,“to”应该还是需要的,否则感觉语义读上去不是很明了,而且有与“related”比较的错觉 另外,有一点,希望大家指点啊~白勇上好像说过,标准书面语倾向于用about,而不使用concerning,很久没看这本书了,所以我暂时只找到了一个例子,也不知道可不可行,请大家拍砖啊~ The current administration ,being worried over some foreign trade barries being removed and our exports failing to increase as a result of deep cuts in the value of the dollar ,has formed a group to study ways to sharpen our competivities. 它的正确选项是:worried about the removal of some foreign trade barries and the failure of our exports 另一错误选项是:because of its worry corcerning the removal of some foreign trade barries ,also concerning the failure of our exports 虽然,这个点,不是这个句子的致命伤,但BY明确说了这个点 |