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楼主
发表于 2008-8-17 11:31:00 | 只看该作者

"美"文求批, -.-


    


    

看了(说费时)sophiess 的立志, 我活 了这么就, 第一篇完成的toefl作文......够汗的了~~花了35分钟, 超时了~~而且结尾超笨~~~哈哈哈哈, 大家帮忙看看啊....

Do you agree or disagree with the following
statement? High schools should allow students to study the courses that
students want to study. Use specific reasons and examples to support your
opinion.


    

It has always been a controversy on should
high schools allows students to their own courses. Regarding my own experience
as a student in a Canadian high school, I prefer a middle route—having some
courses optional on the premise of completing the basic and important courses
such as mathematics and language.


    

Firstly, an early determination and study of longing
courses help students to set career goal ahead of time. For instance, if I want
to have international businessman as my life career, I can register a financial
and/or business class. After I complete the courses, I earn the credits and have
already obtained essential knowledge before entering the university. This guaranteed
my advantages in the severe competition in the university. 


Secondly, students’ self-determination emphasizes the freedom in study. This sort
of freedom offers students greater opportunities to study want they really desire;
thus, they can make more enthusiastic and easier approach to the courses. Consequently,
this freedom contributes to success.


Finally, students can manage their own timetables to utilize their time
efficiently. Hard courses can be blended with easy ones, and courses in the
same area can be taken together. This great advantage is the gospel to those
who feel study is too intense or hard to manage.


    

Although system of course taking in Canada
varied among provinces, the base is that students have their own choices of courses as long as they can have the major subjects fulfilled. The above evidence well represents the reasons
and advantages for this policy by having partial courses optional and others compulsory.



沙发
 楼主| 发表于 2008-8-17 11:35:00 | 只看该作者
刚发完, 就发现好像太短了, hohoho
板凳
发表于 2008-8-17 13:02:00 | 只看该作者
确实太短了,大哥
地板
 楼主| 发表于 2008-8-17 13:15:00 | 只看该作者
觉得是受加拿大这边教育影响的吧, 写作现在顺手写简易的.
5#
发表于 2008-8-17 13:20:00 | 只看该作者

我写第一篇的时候用了2个半小时呢

我作文很懒,也不能给你提什么建设性意见

只是再写长一些吧,前辈们的经验400字以上易拿高分

继续努力!

加油!!

6#
 楼主| 发表于 2008-8-17 14:01:00 | 只看该作者
400字? 哇, 看来我的学学些无敌扩充法了~~~~~~~
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