(A) that, in order to maintain competitiveness, rich nations have joined this downward slide toward more lax attitudes about pollution 看着好喜欢。。。至少没看到错误 (B) that, for maintaining competitiveness, rich nations join in this downward slide toward more lax attitudes about pollution 除了楼上有人指出for maintaining competitiveness的错误外,时态也是另一个错误。join用一般现在时在这里肯定是不恰当的。一般现在时表示反复发生的动作及人或物的一般特征(不指特定的时间)、客观事实/存在、科学事实、地理位置、统计数据、研究结论、商业惯例、法律规定或合同约定等用一般现在时。join是一次性动作。 (C) that rich nations join this downward slide toward more lax attitudes about pollution because of wanting to maintain competitiveness 除了join看着不爽,because of后面只能跟名词。 (D) that in rich nations, joining this downward slide toward more lax attitudes about pollution is a result of wanting to maintain competition 这个我没看出语法错误来,但是绝对符合OG中Wordy和Awkward的标准。 (E) that wanting to maintain competition is making rich nations join in this downward slide toward an attitude about pollution that is more lax 同D。而且句子中心和A不同。A的中心是rich rations have joined in this downward slide...,而在这里变成了强调rich nations要join的原因是wanting to maintain competition
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