885 sec12-18 (大全679）

xiaoyue45084508

Temporary-employment agencies benefit not only from the increasing demand for clerical workers but also the higher profits made when highly paid professionals are placed, requests for whom have increased in the recent wave of corporate takeovers.
(A) the higher profits made when highly paid professionals are placed, requests for whom
(B) the higher profits that are made in the placement of highly paid professionals, requests for whom
(C) from the requests for highly paid professionals, who make higher profits for the agencies when placed and whose requests
(D) from highly paid professionals, whose placement makes higher profits for the agencies and whose requests
(E) from the higher profits made in placing highly paid professionals, requests for whom
答案是E，为什么选E不选D呢？
谢谢指点！

turtlechen

I chose E at first time, too.
In(E)  not only from workers (人) ...but also from profits($)...
In(D)  not only from workers (人) ...but also from proffessionals(人)...

Logic is the first priority in GMAT question!

xiaoyue45084508

谢谢turtlechen
我找到了原来gemj的解释，都怪自己不会用搜索。

gemj的解释如下：
改错中正确选项是不可能出现RUN－ON句型的。将正确选项代入是

Temporary-employment agencies benefit not only from the increasing demand for clerical workers but also from the higher profits made in placing highly paid professionals, requests for whom have increased in the recent wave of corporate takeovers.

requests是名词，意思是something asked for，whom是professionals的引导词，引导的是从句，从句的谓语是have increased。requests for whom have increased是多么完美的组合啊！

gmat700+

以下是引用xiaoyue45084508在2004-1-13 21:33:00的发言：
谢谢turtlechen
我找到了原来gemj的解释，都怪自己不会用搜索。

gemj的解释如下：
改错中正确选项是不可能出现RUN－ON句型的。将正确选项代入是

Temporary-employment agencies benefit not only from the increasing demand for clerical workers but also from the higher profits made in placing highly paid professionals, requests for whom have increased in the recent wave of corporate takeovers.

requests是名词，意思是something asked for，whom是professionals的引导词，引导的是从句，从句的谓语是have increased。requests for whom have increased是多么完美的组合啊！

没搜索到gemj大虾的原贴。就上贴来讲，我还是不太明白 requests for whom have increased……在整个句子中到底做什么成份？它既不是同位语，也不是独立主格。whom虽然指代的是professionals，但是whom引导的并不是从句啊！逗号后面的部分是独立的一句话：requests for professionals have increased。但是这句话又和前面的主句又没有联接词，不就是造成了run-on句型吗？

百思不得其解啊!

[此贴子已经被作者于2004-8-9 5:49:50编辑过]

rt316

以下是引用gmat700+在2004-8-9 3:53:00的发言：

没搜索到gemj大虾的原贴。就上贴来讲，我还是不太明白 requests for whom have increased……在整个句子中到底做什么成份？它既不是同位语，也不是独立主格。whom虽然指代的是professionals，但是whom引导的并不是从句啊！逗号后面的部分是独立的一句话：requests for professionals have increased。但是这句话又和前面的主句又没有联接词，不就是造成了run-on句型吗？

百思不得其解啊!

我觉得或许理解为一个变相的定从比较合适，类似于我们通常所见的介词+which类型。

gmat700+

嗯，今天又看到了一个类似的句型，一下就明白了。昨天我的脑袋锈住了。

Xandria

请NN再分析一下E吧.

requests为什么可以做professtional的同位语, 逻辑不同啊!

另外for whom为什么后面不加完整结构呢, 不是说介词+which/whom后面是完整结构吗?

jerrold0023

以下是引用gmat700+在2004-8-9 3:53:00的发言：

没搜索到gemj大虾的原贴。就上贴来讲，我还是不太明白 requests for whom have increased……在整个句子中到底做什么成份？它既不是同位语，也不是独立主格。whom虽然指代的是professionals，但是whom引导的并不是从句啊！逗号后面的部分是独立的一句话：requests for professionals have increased。但是这句话又和前面的主句又没有联接词，不就是造成了run-on句型吗？

百思不得其解啊!

同问

潜龙勿用

以下是引用Xandria在2005-7-1 7:29:00的发言：

请NN再分析一下E吧.

requests为什么可以做professtional的同位语, 逻辑不同啊!

另外for whom为什么后面不加完整结构呢, 不是说介词+which/whom后面是完整结构吗?

Requests for whom 在这里是做为定语从句,非同位语.

Xandria

有这样的定语从句吗?

即使是, 那requests也应该是先行词, 那requests和什么去对应啊?

另外介词+whom后面不是应该加完整的句子吗?