GWD31-9的同位语，倒装问题

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31-Q

GWD31-Q9倒装问题

As a pianist, composer, scholar, and essayist on a variety of learned subjects, among the most gifted and versatile musicians of his time was Camille Saint-Saens(1835-1921) who was, as many of his contemporaries were, deeply interested in Oriental themes.
                    

A.       As a pianist ,composer, scholar, and essayist on a variety of learned subjects, among the most gifted and versatile musicians of his time was Camille Saint-Saens (1835-1921), who was

B.       As a pianist, composer, scholar, and essayist on a variety of earned subjects, Camille Saint-Saens (1835-1921) was among the most gifted and versatile Musicians of his time and having been

C.       Pianist, composer, scholar, and essayist on a variety of learned subjects, among the most gifted and versatile musicians of his time was Camille Saint-Saens(1835-1921), and he was

D.      Pianist, composer, scholar, and essayist on a variety of learned subjects, Camille Saint-Saens (1835-1921) was among the most gifted and versatile musicians of his time and was

E.       Pianist, composer, scholar, and essayist on a variety of learned subjects, Camille Saint-Saens (1835-1921), who was, among the musicians of his time, one of the most gifted and versatile, had been

这题，我在A和D中选了好久，后来我觉得还是A对的。。

原因如下：Dpianist，composer。。。应该前面加as。。这里应该是状语，不能作为同位语，要是作为同位语，是不是后面的 Camille这个人的左右都应该加逗号？？

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Pianist, composer, scholar, and essayist on a variety of learned subjects, Camille Saint-Saens (1835-1921) ，was among the most gifted and versatile musicians of his time and was

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楼主为什么每次发帖子都不把答案标上?

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I will choose d.

choic D is more clear and less redundant than choice A

其实a和d最主要的是语序的问题，通常来说英文是在设下疑问之后会立马解答：比如说这个题目，当读到a pianist, composer, scholar, and essayist on a variety of learned subjects,时候，读者一定会想，这个人是谁；而a的表达紧接又设下了一个疑问“among。。。。”这种表达，显然没有d来得直接和简洁

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9. GWD31-Q9

As a pianist, composer, scholar, and essayist on a variety of learned subjects, among the most gifted and versatile musicians of his time was Camille Saint-Saens(1835-1921) who was, as many of his contemporaries were, deeply interested in Oriental themes.

A.       As a pianist ,composer, scholar, and essayist on a variety of learned subjects, among the most gifted and versatile musicians of his time was Camille Saint-Saens (1835-1921), who was
        我认为选项A的问题不是在倒装错了，错误点有2个，第1个是不定冠词”a”，这边很明显C这个人的身份有4种，所以加了”a”是很怪异的，第2点我认为后面的”deeply interested in Oriental themes”资讯并不比之前不重要，所以改成像D一样并列关系，反而是比较符合句意的！

B.       As a pianist, composer, scholar, and essayist on a variety of earned subjects, Camille Saint-Saens (1835-1921) was among the most gifted and versatile Musicians of his time and having been

C.       Pianist, composer, scholar, and essayist on a variety of learned subjects, among the most gifted and versatile musicians of his time was Camille Saint-Saens(1835-1921), and he was

D.       Pianist, composer, scholar, and essayist on a variety of learned subjects, Camille Saint-Saens (1835-1921) was among the most gifted and versatile musicians of his time and was

E.       Pianist, composer, scholar, and essayist on a variety of learned subjects, Camille Saint-Saens (1835-1921), who was, among the musicians of his time, one of the most gifted and versatile, had been

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The origin:

Debussy said that, right? Think again. The real author was Camille Saint-Saëns. Pianist, composer, scholar and essayist on a variety of learned subjects, Saint-Saëns was among the most gifted and versatile musicians of his time, and deeply interested in Oriental themes. His first opera to reach the stage, La Princesse Jaune (1872), reflected the incipient fashion for Japanese design that would play a central part in the Aesthetic movement of the 1880s.