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105. Students at universities often have a choice of places to live. They may choose to live in university dormitories, or they may choose to live in apartments in the community. Compare the advantages of living in university housing with the advantages of living in an apartment in the community. Where would you prefer to live? Give reasons for your preference. 

 

 

     Recently ,with the rapid development of society, increasing students tend to move out of the dormitories and live in the apartments near the campus .As to whether living outside in the community ,students' ideas are not cut from the same cloth due to their perspective angles .As far as I am concerned , however ,I prefer to take the dormitory as my living room.

   It is definitely true that living outside has its attracting advantages, especially to those who like pursuing freedom and private space. Without any regulations and disciplines, students living outside own more leisure time than those living in campus in most cases. Therefore they are capable of dominating the time to enjoy their own life and leading a more comfortable life. What's more, since there are no longer any examinations, living outside would  absolutely enable students possess much more freedom time ,and do whatever they desire to do .

     However, the merit of living in campus clearly overweighs that of living in community. The essential factor that deserves our consideration is that students ,who choose dormitories as habitation, are likely to save time .Actually, almost all the university students work hard ,they spend most of their time studying from dawn to dusk in the classrooms or in the library .Believe it or not ,for them not only does time mean the life available, but also the knowledge they gain from books .Luckily, living in university dormitories provides students the access to save more time ,for the distance between the living room and studying place is so close that it only takes a little time to reach the destination.

     Next point with the equally significant is that it is a remarkable opportunity for students living in campus to communicate with each other. Obviously, living together with others would offers students more time and chances to intercourse in the means of watching competitive football games for instance, so that students are able to strengthen the mutual comprehension. It is widely believed that deep understanding is the prerequisite of making good friends .Most roommates in the university eventually become best friends after the precious college time, regardless of their different interests or living habits .Also, students would obtain more chances to solve the problems of the study courses and acquire appropriate methods by exchanging the perspective opinions, which is undoubtedly benefits to students’ study.

   In conclusion ,despite the fact that living in a apartment outside bear some advantages ,such as having more free time ,it is a sensible elect to living in campus, for which is available not only  to save time that can be utilize to study , but also to shape a harmonious relationship with others.