請教GWD3-Q22 (之前沒人討論過)

ashleyyuan

請問這題 C錯 除了改變原有句子意思,改變原有因果關係的句意外,還有哪裡有錯呢?
請指點 謝謝

    

    

GWD3-Q22:

    

On account of a law passed in 1993,
making it a crime punishable by imprisonment that a United
States citizen hold gold in the form of bullion or
coins, immigrants found that on arrival in the United States they had to surrender
all of the gold they had brought with them.

    

A.     
On account of a law passed in 1993, making it a crime
punishable by imprisonment that a United States citizen hold

    

B.      
With a law passed in 1933 that makes it a crime punishable
by imprisonment that a United
  States citizen hold

    

C.      A law passed in 1933 that made it a crime punishable by
imprisonment for a United
  States citizen holding

    

D.      Because of a law passed in 1933 making it a crime
punishable by imprisonment for a United States citizen to hold

    

E.      
Due to a law being passed in 1933 that makes it a crime
punishable by imprisonment for a United States citizen to hold

愁予

C中“，”以前其实是一个名词短语，只能做同位语修饰immigrants，明显是不合理的

笨笨可可

请问选B错在哪里？

AlienX

"With..."在修飾"found"...

reallingling

以下是引用ashleyyuan在2008-6-5 15:40:00的发言：
請問這題 C錯 除了改變原有句子意思,改變原有因果關係的句意外,還有哪裡有錯呢?
請指點 謝謝

 

 

GWD3-Q22:

 

On account of a law passed in 1993,
making it a crime punishable by imprisonment that a United
States citizen hold gold in the form of bullion or
coins, immigrants found that on arrival in the United States they had to surrender
all of the gold they had brought with them.

 

A.     
On account of a law passed in 1993, making it a crime
punishable by imprisonment that a United States citizen hold

 

B.      
With a law passed in 1933 that makes it a crime punishable
by imprisonment that a United
  States citizen hold

 

C.      A law passed in 1933 that made it a crime punishable by
imprisonment for a United
  States citizen holding

 

D.      Because of a law passed in 1933 making it a crime
punishable by imprisonment for a United States citizen to hold

 

E.      
Due to a law being passed in 1933 that makes it a crime
punishable by imprisonment for a United States citizen to hold

choose b

c "sentence, sentence" is not proper form of expression

d is also not correctly, since " becuase of + n.+doing" is not a good way of expression.

ashleyyuan

這個句子有兩個部份，主要子句跟從屬子句。主要子句部份沒問題，問題出在從屬子句。

A  On account of是「由於」的意思，後面接的是名詞而不是句子，這邊的passed應該是分詞形容law，

 That 子句裡的主詞是a United States citizen，使用的動詞應該是holds而不是hold.

B 句子語意改變了，變成「伴隨著法律通過條文……，移民……｣，就語意來講，移民並不會伴隨著條文而怎樣怎樣。

C  兩個句子當中缺乏合適的連接詞，變成run-on sentence，且改變原句從屬意思。.

E  錯的地方在於being passed形容law. 動詞型態應該用主動而非被動型態的分詞。

modteen

C哪里是两个句子啊，改成“a low was passed....”这才是两个句子，

ashleyyuan

啊~我眼拙,沒注意到少了一個be動詞才會變成句子
C選項應該是個片語才對.看來二樓的解說是正確的.謝謝