The number of dogs weighted above 20 pounds will grow from 10000 in 2001 to 30000 in 2005, including those weighted above 30 pounds increasing from 5000 in 2001 to 10000 in 2005.
这里的including是对的,including有“包含”的意思,意思比with更加明确。 the number of dogs weighted above 20 pounds will grow from 10000 in 2001 to 30000 in 2005, including those weighted above 30 pounds increasing from 5000 in 2001 to 10000 in 2005.
=The number of dogs including those weighted above 30 pounds increasing from 5000 in 2001 to 10000 in 2005 and weighted above 20 pounds will grow from 10000 in 2001 to 30000 in 2005. 这个句子的定语显然太长,所以把including的位置改变使得原文更加清晰。