[求助]月底的托，第一篇习作，大家帮忙啊，谢谢啦

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It has recently been announced that a new restaurant may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

In my neighborhood, dwellers confront the dilemma of choosing whether establishing a new restaurant or not. This issue is a much controversial one in that it affects all the people in their daily life. The bands who think highly of the prior one claim that the establishment can promote the economy and conduce to the convenience，while those who vote for the latter idea declare that the construction will undoubtedly constitute a menace to the environment. The choice, nevertheless, is not easy to make. Deliberately, I am in favor of the former one with a clear head and substantial reasons.

 

Among the advantages of the foundation of a restaurant in our community is the economic benefit. On no account can we deny the importance of boosting the economic in the 21st century. It is hard to find an area that cannot trace in some way to pursue economic flourish. In addition, the employment rate is one of the most vital figures in economy. Accordingly, so great is our passion for the increasing employment rate that we are willing to build a restaurant. Facts witness and present a myriad of examples as below. A middle-scaled restaurant can provide virtually 200 occupations for the citizens, promising a dramatic descent of the unemployment rate, which is a significant figure of the blossom of the economy. Besides, profits it gains will in return contribute local tax. Furthermore, the government could improve the condition of the neighborhood by increasing parks as well as exercise equipments. Don’t you think these factors quoted above are very persuasive?

 

Additionally, unaware of the various benefits that a restaurant has had in convenience are those dwellers who regard the restaurant useless. As is evidenced in a recent survey on the internet, it can be predicted that a restaurant can accelerate the development of the local commerce in a variety of ways. For example, with more people having meals there, sorts of shops will appear, such as supermarkets and department stores. With a supermarket nearby, the local residents could purchase a myriad of goods at one time, saving them a vast amount of time, which qualifies them to read or do some housework. It is no better illustration that can demonstrate the convenience the restaurant brought on. Consequently, building a restaurant will not fail to be a wiser and safer choice.

 

When we enjoy benefits of a restaurant, isn’t it necessary that we give some consideration to the drawbacks? The most extreme manifestation of this viewpoint is the fact that the noise and air pollution, to some extent, during the construction period will detrimental to the body health in the short term. However, it won’t influence much more in the long run.

 

To sum up, considerable though the disadvantages that a restaurant results in are, they cannot compete with the excellences it brings about, if economy level and promoted convenience are taken into deliberation. Such experience, which weighs so heavily on my mind that other controversy against setting up a restaurant is as dust in the balance, will definitely leads to my original inclination. While at the same time, the construction manager has no alternative but to take measures to avoid noise and the declining quality of atmosphere, so that we can enjoy more favorable points brought by the restaurant.

我是把好多模板凑到一起的，不知道这样会不会有问题，谢谢大家啦