菜鸟求助：run-on sentence

fcceline

OG解释里的正确例句：Jose Canseco is still a feared batter, most pichers don't want to face him.

前后两个句子不都是完整的句子么？为什么可以用逗号连接？

附带：OG11-18

   Computers are becoming faster, more powerful, and more reliable, and so too are modems, they are the
                devices to allow two or more computers to share information over regular telephone lines.

(A)         so too are modems, they are the devices to allow

解释：A. they are creats a run-on sentence       偶不明白啊～～

                                                                                    

                                                                                                 BY  语法一窍不通的celine

[此贴子已经被作者于2008-4-2 14:39:10编辑过]

sc2412002

Jose Canseco is still a feared batter, most pichers don't want to face him. 应该不正确吧!! (少了连接词)

OG-18 里
            so too are modems 已经是一个独立子句，若后面又加
            they are the devices… 毕会造成run-on sentence

fcceline

我也觉得那个句子少了连接词，可OG里说这是正确的句子

错误句子为：Jose Canseco is still a feared batter most pichers don't want to face him.（中间少了逗号）

且OG对run-on sentence 的解释是：A run-on sentence is two independent clauses that run together withhout proper punctuation.

要是根据这个解释的话，OG-18 A选项岂不是正确的？

乙乙

Kaplan 语法教程对RUN-ON SENTENCES的解释

RUN-ON SENTENCES
When a sentence consists of more than one clause, those clauses must be joined properly. It is never acceptable
to hook two clauses together with a comma, as the “sentence” below does. That’s called a run-on sentence.

Wrong: Nietzsche moved to Basel in 1869, he planned to teach classical philology.

There are a number of acceptable ways to fix a run-on.
1. Make two separate sentences:
   Nietzsche moved to Basel in 1869. He planned to teach classical philology.
2a. Change the comma to a semicolon:
   Nietzsche moved to Basel in 1869; he planned to teach classical philology.
2b. Join the clauses with a semicolon and a transition word such as however or therefore.
   Nietzsche planned to teach classical philology; therefore, he moved to Basel in 1869.

[此贴子已经被作者于2008-4-3 19:03:34编辑过]

william0707

OG写错了,不用管它

反正Computers are becoming faster, more powerful, and more reliable, and so too are modems, they are the
            devices to allow  肯定是错的

A is ***, B is ***肯定错的

run-on 句子是错误句子,不是正确的.OG这里写的不太清楚

fcceline

我明白了～谢谢大家指点哇！