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3.30考T ,可否帮我看看我的作文?感激~~

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3.30考T ,可否帮我看看我的作文?感激~~

     When ask about whether people need to attend to colleges or universities ,the overwhelming majority of people believe that it is worth well .A good case in point is that we can make our ideal come true by the knowledge which we learned from universities and the relationship which we set up in our colleges. Some people used to think that we can’t find a good job even though we finished our study in the colleges. judging from all evidence afford, I think attend in college is the most important step in the life.

      Perhaps the fundamental reason is the rapidly development of technology in nowadays. We can learn all kind of systematic knowledge in universities, the college offer us variety of majory that we can choose the one interest us and get into it. only in this way can we adopt to the person with ability which need by the society .

       Another reason can be seen by every person is that we can know more friends than before, and we can learn different way of thinking style .as an old saying goes:(三人行,必有我师
                
When I walk along with two others, they may serve me as my teachers.
                    
Set myself as an example ,I got a friend ,who is very good at study, I study with him everyday, some months later ,we make progress together, especially I get a much better way for self-study. 

       The last but not the least ,we are making our career preparation though all this years in the college. I can think of no better illustration than that with the 4 years knowledge we gathered and the people we learned from, we are ready to get into society when we graduated.

       From what has been offered above, we may reasonably the conclusion that attending college or university plays an important part in our lives. I also believe that go to university can  make our lives different..

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