OG 11-51 官方解释

ambrosecelin

'In that' is a conjunction that means inasmuch as; because 'in that' has largely gone out of use, it is considered stileted and overly formal. It also uses two words when one would do.

这到底是在说in that好还是不好啊？看不懂了。。前句话好像是说out of use，但最后一句话好像是说用两个词>一个词？

请大家指点。。。

sunshoes

先把原题和解释贴过来

51. The Olympic Games helped to keep peace among the pugnacious states of the Greek world in that a sacred truce was proclaimed during the festival's month.

(A)         world in that a sacred truce was proclaimed during the festival's month

(B)         world, proclaiming a sacred truce during the festival's month

(C)        world when they proclaimed a sacred truce for the festival month

(D)        world, for a sacred truce was proclaimed during the month of the festival

(E)         world by proclamation of a sacred truce that was for the month of the festival

Idiom + Rhetorical construction

This sentence depends on using the correct conjunction  to join two independent clauses.
   In that is a conjunction  that means inasmuch as; because in that has largely gone out of use, it is considered stilted and overly formal. It also uses two words when one would do. In this sentence, the second clause explains the first one, so the conjunction  for, meaning because, is the most appropriate choice for joining the two independent clauses of the compound sentence.

A        In that is stilted and overly formal

B        It is not clear who would be doing the proclaiming, a clause is preferable to a phrase here

C        They is ambiguous, possibly referring to either the states or the Games

D       Correct. In this sentence, the conjunction for joins the two clauses correctly and economically.

E        Wordy and awkward construction

The correct answer is D.

 inasmuch as = since

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sunshoes

我理解是in that,gone out of use,

because in that means inasmush as (inasmuch=since)，太过正式

后面这句，It also uses two words when one would do

我理解，意思说，当可以用一个词for时，用两个词 in that 有点多余

如og 解释中所说的一样，stilted.

well4eva

根据好几题OG对in that的不友善的解释，以后看到in that的选项就基本可以淘汰了

ambrosecelin

但是以前的思路好像是说in that比because更清晰啊。。。而且GMAT不就是考书面用语么？书面用语当然比较正式了。。。难道思路错了？？

sunshoes

。。。。这个，

我感觉，平常所用的，或者书本上，各种文章里的表达方式

到了GMAT考试中 就被算做 语法或者逻辑错误～

所以，根据OG和前面所有题的经验 选 正确率会高很多～

关键还是OG

johnyin

问题是它是gone out of use，就像中文里说您今天用餐了么？过于正式，古板。。。

ambrosecelin

有没有大牛来给个确切的说法啊？

张迪清

sunshoes 发表于 2008-2-12 16:48
先把原题和解释贴过来51. The Olympic Games helped to keep peace among the pugnacious states of the Gr ...

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