斑竹帮我批个分吧~谢谢了！

pigleter007

这篇文章写的我实在是没想法了，觉得自己越写越偏题了。。。

题目：Subjects such as art, music, and drama should be a part of every child’s basic education. （agree or disagree）

 

 

Do you enjoy Beethoven’s symphony? Do you appreciate Leonardo Da Vinci’s paintings? To most people, the answers are definitely “yes”. Your ability of appreciation mostly came from the subjects such as art, music, and drama when you were a kid. So personally, I agree that these kinds of subjects should be a part of children’s basic education.

 

 

On the one hand, kids are always curious about everything around them, and they tend to imitate what they like. So it’s very important to help them learn the concept of righteousness at that stage. It’s apparent that kids are quite interesting in stories and performing arts, so why not teach them the rules and norms of the society as well as the traditions of the region by the form of art? The greatest sage in China Confucius said, and I paraphrase, art is the mother of nature, and the mother of human beings. So it’s obvious that kids should learn the primary lessons od the world from their “mothers”.

 

 

On the other hand, children usually have a talent of art. Scientific researches made by Pekin
     University showed that ninety percents of the children involved in the experiment can understand music, drama, and other kinds of art basically correctly after a brief introduction of the masterpieces showed to them, which means there will be no difficulties for teachers to teach art to little children. On the contrary, as I mentioned, if children do have a gift of art, it will probably be the case that children have a much more special understanding of art than those adults do. Therefore, why don’t we give them the chance to create a colorful understanding of those classic works through the learning of these artistic subjects?

 

 

Generally speaking, I find no reason why those artistic subjects should not be included in children’s curriculums.

[此贴子已经被作者于2008-2-11 19:14:28编辑过]

pigleter007

为什么都没人理阿？

pigleter007

自己顶~

guolinwen

I've seen a lot of compositions here using different templates helping them have good structures. However, this one is the best, out of those template-free compositions. I will give 24 if I am a rater.

 

 

Do you enjoy Beethoven’s symphony? Do you appreciate Leonardo Da Vinci’s paintings? To most people, the answers are definitely “yes”. Your(their) ability of appreciation mostly came from the subjects such as art, music, and drama when you(they) were a kid. So personally, I agree that these kinds of subjects should be a part of children’s basic education.

On the(x) one hand, kids are always curious about everything around them, and they tend to imitate what they like(acquire). So it’s very important to help them learn the concept of righteousness at that stage. It’s apparent that kids are quite interesting(ted) in stories and performing arts(stories and art performances), so why not teach them the rules and norms of the society as well as the traditions of the region(local traditions) by the form of art? as The greatest sage in China(Chinese sage) Confucius said, and I paraphrase(x, do not introduce egoism), art is the mother of nature, and the mother of human beings. So it’s obvious that kids should learn the primary lessons od the world from their “mother’

On the other hand, children usually have a talent of art. Scientific researches made(conducted) by Peking University showed that ninety percents(percent) of the children
      involved in the experiment(you are making the study humble, correct it to: the investigated children) can understand music, drama, and other kinds of art(s)
      basically(x) correctly after a brief introduction of the masterpieces showed to them(x), which means(indicates) there will be no difficulties for teachers to teach art to little children. On the contrary, as I mentioned(x, do not introduce egoism), if children do have a gift of art, it will probably be the case that children have a much more special understanding of art than those adults do. Therefore, why don’t we give them the chance to create a colorful understanding of those classic works through the learning of these artistic subjects?

Generally speaking, I find no reason why those artistic subjects should not be included in children’s curriculums. (the conclusion is too simple though)

[此贴子已经被作者于2008-2-15 6:42:23编辑过]

pigleter007

THANKS A LOT！！