15号考 第一篇作文阿 望批改 急！！

la_neige

这是我写的第一篇作文阿 这水平...是不是可以基本放弃了...

Do you agree or disagree the following statement 
Advertisement is a waste of time and money for a company, because customers already know what they want.

 

    The seemingly reasonable claim that advertisement is a waste of time and money for a company makes it difficult for the general public separate fact from fiction, however, it is not supported by the real truth which we observed. I hold a negative attitude toward the viewpoint. I think that it is necessary for companies to use advertisements to papularize
                themselves.

    The main reason for my propensity for advocating ads is that the ad is like the north star which can guide the tendency of the customers’ consumption. And it is no better illustration of this idea than the fact that ads contains a bunch of attractive news about the products, such as the discount. If customers find this product is much cheaper than what they want to buy previously, they are likely to change their minds because of the lower price.

    The above is only one part of the important aspects, and another one with equal significance is that ads help the company upgrade their popularity,
                so customers have to pay attention on the product because of the ads about it from TVs, radios, Internet and so on. For instance, on your way to home, you take the bus, and then notice an ad about a computer. And you are planning to buy a computer but almost make a decision about the brand. So, maybe you do not care about this ad. But then, you take off the bus and walk for home. You find the same ad on both sides of the road. A little care? Finally, you arrive at home and turn on the TV for relaxation. The same ad appears once again. Now, what do you think of it? You may watch the ad carefully and think it over to compare it with your thought one. If it has the obvious advantages, you will change your idea to buy this one. So, the ads are very useful for the product.

    Admittedly, ads costs the company a lot of money and time. However, it has its strong value about the spread of the product. And then, it can influence the decision of the customers. Therefore, ads are not waste time and money for a company. It has its own value.

fireuc

我和你同一天.我觉得你写的还不错...比我强...

我快放弃了...