[求助]PREP1-62 不懂,请教一下

confidence08

62. Because she knew many of the leaders of colonial America and the American Revolution personally, Mercy Otis Warren was continually at or near the center of political events from 1765 to 1789, a vantage point combining with her talent for writing to make her one of the most valuable historians of the ear

(a) a vantage point combining with her talent for writing to make

(b) a vantage point, when combined with her talent for writing, that made

(c) a vantage point that combined with her talent for writing, and it made

(d) and this vantage point, which combined with her talent for writing to make

(e) and this vantage point, combined with her talent for writing, made

 

 

 

 

A: combining用被动比较好

B: when combined状语从句应该在that以内，否则没有修饰对象？

C: combined用被动，it没有指代对象

D: and后面句子不完整

E: correct

 

注意：

1、             同位语从句如果想表达复杂的意思，用并列句更完整一些

2、             Combine等一些动词更适合用被动表达

B的解释是什么意思,不懂呢,有谁明白吗?先谢谢大家.

经纪人

B的错误在于a vantage point不能被后面逗号隔开，因为它并不是修饰前面的句子的。所以这里不能独立出来。不过上面B的解释确实晦涩难懂。我看了几个词就看不下去了。我要是你我宁可自己琢磨去。

confidence08

以下是引用经纪人在2007-11-17 12:14:00的发言：
B的错误在于a vantage point不能被后面逗号隔开，因为它并不是修饰前面的句子的。所以这里不能独立出来。不过上面B的解释确实晦涩难懂。我看了几个词就看不下去了。我要是你我宁可自己琢磨去。

回复好快啊,谢谢.不过我还是有些不太明白,是说同位语句子中不能有断开吗,能否解释的详细一点,先谢谢啦

bandito

不是不能断开，是B选项把a vantage point完全用逗号孤立起来了，造成意思停顿，前言不搭后语。

confidence08

以下是引用bandito在2007-11-17 20:58:00的发言：

不是不能断开，是B选项把a vantage point完全用逗号孤立起来了，造成意思停顿，前言不搭后语。

ok,got it! thanks a lot!