Neither First Lady Eleanor Roosevelt nor Secretary of Labor Frances Perkins sought recognition by the press, and both cautiously allowed others of the Roosevelt brain trust to take credit for the genesis of historic programs in public employment, relief, and social security that were in large measure what they had been responsible for. B.to take credit for the genesis of historic programs in public employment, relief, and social security for which the two women were in large measure responsible
for which不一定要加comma,要不要comma要看修飾語是否essential/non-essential modifier. 這裡如果不加comma,句子的意思是存在很多的historic programs in pe, r and ss,但是就特指兩位女生負責的項目;如果有comma的話,後面的內容就變成了extra information,不是句子的主要內容,就是說沒有了它意思都會完整的。但這樣是不對的,受到好評的不是所有programs,而只是兩位女生負責的programs.
hope that helps;)
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