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上次写的太挫了,这次不敢用长句了,请NN们拍

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发表于 2007-11-8 22:36:00 | 只看该作者

上次写的太挫了,这次不敢用长句了,请NN们拍


    

题目的大概意思是college
years is most precious


    

 


    

The topic claim that college years are the
most precious time of one's life, and in my opinion, I think highly of this
argument.


    

 


    

One major reason is colleges years are the
golden age in one's life time, which means a lot of dreams to fulfill. After
hard working in high school, we can usher the quiet time in Campus and choose
to learn the subject that we interest in. Since we are so young and so
creative, we can imagine our beautiful future, enjoy the talking with teachers
and friends, view glorious landscape of the country and participate in charity
jobs. These just exist in campus, and if we start our career, working is the
first concern and you will never have time to think freely until retire. You may
only recall the memories then. So I treat these golden years carefully.


    

 


    

Besides the life style, we would have more
chances to make new friends and grasp opportunities.
People tend to be more gallant when they are
young, and they can try whatever they can. What's more, college offer a lot of
chances for the students, suppose you can have dinner with respectful entrepreneurs like Bill Gats or Jack Wedge when they are giving an address in the
university, but you may always watch them in TV after working. During college
times, People who share the same interest may easily build up sincere relation,
because there is not much concern about money and utilitarian. It’s also true that
many great people start their business in their college years. Bill left Harvard without any hesitation and devote himself in programming
for the IBM, at last he established Microsoft;
Clinton
found his talents on politics in Yale, gradually become the president of
United States.
As a result, college students should spend time on finding

friends and recognizing their interests.


    

 


    

Another important factor is that we can
test our potential without worrying about failure. The cost of failure at
college years is much lower than making mistakes career time. If engineers make
unqualified buildings which are easy to fall, or an account didn't cheated in
finance, in these situations, both the companies and the workers may come
across great problems. However, if you are in college, you can test your
ability on every area. There is no need to worry about failure, because we can draw
conclusion from them and change them into experience, which is also an
important wealth in later life.


    

 


    

Admittedly, students may take a lot of
burden for part time jobs or studies because they are not independent on
finance, but on the whole it's temporary. So, I really cherished the years I
have during my college time and I believe they are truly valuable.


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