选择高薪还是自己喜欢的工作？求批啦．．．感激不尽．．本周考咯～～

quanweiwei

Some people may confront difficulties when they must make a decision, to choose a high salary job, or a job he/she likes. As my own perspective, a citizen must be offered a job which is paid highly. A high salary work can lead us to a cozy life, a high reputation and respect. Further more, with the spare money, we are able to be engaged in many fields draw our attention.

  First and foremost, the salary can meet our fundamental needs to the lives, whatever high or low. A person is not an individual, he/she lives in a real world. In this world, large amount of money should be spent on the daily life. It will not only be spent on the food, clothes, houses and so on, but also be cost on the education fees, medical insurance, cars repair and so on. All the commodity needs money. In this case, adult must be engaged in a satisfactory job which at least can earn the fundamental fees. Without that, how can we live a happy life? A cozy life is the purpose everybody purchase.

  Besides, an outstanding job can give you others’ respects and reputation. Generally speaking, the type such as  managers and professors is called up classical keep the large part of the wealth of the society. Also the hard working and intellectual persons can attain a piece of good salary. Your job is the symbolize of your stage and identification. For examples, a lot of hotels and parties are only open to the rich. If you enter the up classical society, you may become more wealth. In contrary, lower-paid people only live in the poor circumvents from generation to generation.

  What is more, your spare money lead you to continual your hobbies. For example, you have a dance dream in your childhood. Unluckily, your parents didn’t allow you to dance because they want you to do a stable job. Later, you become a engineer. It is known to everybody, the salary of a engineer is so high that you can save a lot. With this spare money you can occupy some dance course, take part in the dance club and watch some drama. Many of the methods can be used to compensate your pity. Definitely, the first thing is that you have enough money.

  According to the above, the good job will play a vital role in people’s lives. Though, we know, our interests are of importance, human always are fond of the enjoyable things. The reality is cruel that we must realize the high salary is the best safe guard for our live.

alexwithibt

整体感觉还可以. 写的挺清楚.

我改了下第一段. 比原来的多出来一些字

Some people may confront difficulties when they must make a decision, to choose a high salary job, or a job he/she likes. As my own perspective, a citizen must be offered a job which is paid highly. A high salary work can lead us to a cozy life, a high reputation and respect. Further more, with the spare money, we are able to be engaged in many fields draw our attention.

 

 

Few people are never confronted with such difficulty on choice as high salary jobs or jobs they prefer. From my perspective, I will definitely pursue the high salary job while facing dilemma. With high salary, we might own more resources to arrive what we have invariably been eager to yet never achieved just due to lack of money, say, purchasing a lob cabin house to accommodate cozy environment for my family, gaining high reputation in society to gratify our confidence, and even allowing my children’ dream to reality.

quanweiwei

谢谢楼上的大侠啦~~~~~~~~

现在就觉得自己句子不够漂亮