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楼主
发表于 2007-10-24 13:59:00 | 只看该作者

快考试了,大家帮忙看看作文~谢

101.some people like doing work by hand. Others prefer using machines. Which do you prefer? Use specufuc reasons and ecamples to support your answer.

 

Nowadays, people often go to extremes when they talk about how they work. Some people enjoy working by hands, while others argue that working by machine is better. For my part, using machine to do work is more suitable. Because with the help of machines I can work more quickly and accurately, also, working by machine cannot make me feel so tired as working by hands.

 

For starters, doing some tasks on machine saves a lot of time. I served a good example. Last time, my professor gave students an assignment which was an eight pages essay about the Great Wall. After the class, I just went back home and searched the internet to look for information about the Great Wall. Luckily, there were a large amount of materials about it. After I learned the background and some interesting stories about Great Wall, I began writing the essay. Finally, my professor gave me an A on my essay which just cost me a whole afternoon. In contrast, one of my classmates, Yu, he went to the library, and read a lot of archaeological books to find information about the Great Wall. Actually, he worked hard, but it is 8 pages he must search. In the end, he just got a C from the professor for the reason that his essay has few examples.

 

In addition, working with a machine will make few mistakes. For example, when scientists are doing experiments, they need to get some data by calculating. Admittedly, scientists have an intelligent brain, but there is never a scientist solves problems on the experiment only by his brain. It is so easy to make mistakes without using machines, and the mistakes maybe will cause a disaster, such as the Columbia spaceship’s wrecking event.

 

Finally, working by hands makes people feel tired. Sometimes we will spend several days copying a long story by hands. Physically, this task will make our hands hurt for a longer period. But if we use computer and the printer, we can get the copy just a few minutes without fatigue. All in all, I prefer to work by using machines for it saves time and energy, and makes my work precise. 

沙发
 楼主| 发表于 2007-10-24 19:41:00 | 只看该作者

为什么没有人帮我批改一下呢?。。

拜托了,,各位高手~!

板凳
发表于 2007-10-25 17:04:00 | 只看该作者

你的结尾在哪里呀?就是最后那句话吗?

这个题目应该很好写的吧.所以我觉得reasoning还行.

但是,语言有点简单哦.

总体还行吧.需要再努力努力!

一家之言,善哉善哉!

地板
 楼主| 发表于 2007-10-25 22:21:00 | 只看该作者

哦,,我知道了~!谢谢,,,

可是语言一直都是很简单唉,怎么办啊11。24就考了

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