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考试临近,作文求拍!谢!!!

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楼主
发表于 2007-10-23 17:03:00 | 只看该作者

考试临近,作文求拍!谢!!!

小女子不才,已经二战,依然对作文有些茫然,感觉自己在处理作文的方式方法上有问题,每次拿到一个作文题,只感觉想写又写不出,能写又来不及,总之身上两座大山——时间来不及,内容挤不出……

马上就要再战IBT了,着急上火,恳请各位大牛小牛指点迷津,狠拍!

感激不尽!!!

it is better to spend money on traveling and vacation than save money. (才写了300个字……知道不好,哭)

 

Undoubtedly, saving money can help people afford their education, prepare for the emergency even fulfill themselves mentally. But as for me, it is a better choice to spend money on traveling. In fact, traveling makes people more energetic and have more inspiration which is helpful to people’s life and work.

 

First of all, traveling broaden one’s horizon. It is worth spending money on journey because we can enjoy the charming scenery, learn varieties of traditional culture and taste different kinds of food. For instance, if you go to Beijing, the capital of China, you will be astonished by the relics such as the Forbidden City and Great Wall. You will be attracted by the local food and snacks which is so delicious and you cannot find the same at other place. And more importantly, you can be more familiar with the history of China and amazed by the intelligence of the ancestors.

 

Furthermore, traveling relaxes people from the exhausting work and inspire people to be energetic. There are lots of writers who love traveling because they can obtain some inspirations to create more stories. There are lots of businessmen spending money on traveling to lighten the stress. There are also lots of people who are depressed go traveling in order to relieve themselves and to be more positive and initiative. If we just save money at home, we will feel exhausted and we may lose our creative and have more depression.

 

Finally, it is important to spend money on traveling rather than save money not only because we need to take advantage of the money we saved before but also we need to enjoy the life. After all, we have one time to live, but we have lots of chances to earn money and save them.

沙发
 楼主| 发表于 2007-10-23 17:16:00 | 只看该作者

求助求助……谢谢谢谢

板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2007-10-23 19:15:00 | 只看该作者

大家多给点意见建议吧……谢谢……

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