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Topic：Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improve the way people live?
 

Easier-prepared food today has became a major kind of food in our life and at the same time it definitely change the way people live.In some respects,it has improved the life of housewives and the life of people at work,furthremore, it has even speed up the steps of social development in a way.

To the housewives,food preparation is no loner a tedious work in daily househould works.In the past, there were a lot of steps to make a good dinner for whole family. For example, housewives usually had to wash and slice vegetables, meat or other materials for cooking.Almost all of the steps were time-consuming tasks.But now, prepared vegetables and meat could be easliy obtained from supermarkets, some of them only need a few minutes to be cooked into delicious dinners.Therefore, this change has made the better lives for all housewives.

To people at work, now those who have no time to make dinners by themselves can save time and money because of the prepared food.As before, it is impossible for these people to spend valuble time on preparing food, so they chose to go for dinner outside. Today, cooking food just required a short time and became easy, as a result people can have meals at home rather than at restuarants.

Last but not least, this change speeds up the steps of social advancement. Actually, the acceleration of the living rhythm bring out the idea of easier-prepared food, however this change have great contributions on our living too. For example, people economize time, energy and money by using easier-prepared food, thus, they would work more effectively on their jobs. Therefore, this change obviously give rise to the economic increases.

In a sum, all these demonstrations show that easier-prepared food has definitely improved our life. I believe that more and more easier food will come out in future and our life will be changed radically than ever before.

[此贴子已经被作者于2007-10-19 20:49:19编辑过]

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