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niswzzhn

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Bluegrass musician Bill Monroe, whose repertory, views on musical collaboration, and vocal style were influential on generations of bluegrass artists, was also an inspiration to many musicians, that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly from his own.

 

(A) were influential on generations of bluegrass artists, was also an inspiration to many musicians, that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly from

(B) influenced generations of bluegrass artists, also inspired many musicians, including Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly from

(C) was influential to generations of bluegrass artists, was also inspirational to many musicians, that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music was different significantly in comparison to

(D) was influential to generations of bluegrass artists, also inspired many musicians, who included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, the music of whom differed significantly when compared to

(E) were an influence on generations of bluegrass artists, was also an inspiration to many musicians, including Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music was significantly different from that of

我想问一下，正确答案B选项的influenced generations of bluegrass artists, also inspired many musicians,之间不用加and连词连接吗？两个动词之间没有连词连接为什么对呢？谢谢大家。

niswzzhn

顶啊！

lisony

句子结构是这样的：

Bluegrass musician Bill Monroe（主语）, （修饰成分1 whose repertory,< 修饰成分2 views on musical collaboration>, and vocal style influenced(修饰成分1的谓语动词） generations of bluegrass artists）,  also inspired（句子的谓语）
                    many musicians（宾语）, including Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly from his own.

提取主干：Bluegrass musician BM inspired musician.

如果also inspired加上and，导致also inspired many...整个部分变成“修饰成分1”的一部分，从而使句子没有谓语动词。造成fragment.

提取主干：Bluegrass musician BM inspired musician.

如果also inspired加上and，导致also inspired many...整个部分变成“修饰成分1”的一部分，从而使句子没有谓语动词。造成fragment.

niswzzhn

很明白啊，谢谢啊，看来句子结构还有问题，要加强啦。

zsz_219

讲的真好，向你致敬。

smallmole