用模板考了六分

melodylau

能不能借鉴一下你的摸板啊,谢谢.
melody_lyj(A) hotmail.com

canada

我的模板参考版主的，请大家看版主的帖子。我把我那天考试的作文大概给大家描述一下。129，关于一个中心。
Recently a university plans to develop a new research center in my country. For this news, there are some people who think they should build a research center for farming, but others hold the opinion that we need a center for business research. (以上抄题目，不用动脑子)。If I face with this issue, I would like to prefer the former one. In the follow discussion, I will give some reasons and evidence to support my selection.

Firstly, in this country which has the most serious problem of overpopulation, we need to build a center for research in agriculture in order to harvest more crops to support the population. (第一句话一定要用复杂句。但语法不要错)。。。。For example, in our country most farming families which have more than four people only have two acres farming land. So …

Secondly, we need to develop a farming research center to solve the globe problem of the poor soil quality. In this field our country were left behind of other advance countries so we need to keep pace with them………for example, in many areas
people are used to cultivating soil by using artificial manure. As a result, the quality becomes more and more poor….

Thirdly, we need to own(和前两段的用词区别开) a research center for farming to devote the decreasing plant diseases……

Off course, everything in the world has two sides. Without exception, people who hold the opinion that we need a center in business also have some reasons. For example, with the development of modern society, many people tend to own their business……. However, comparing with their importance, I think to build a farming center is far more important than the latter one.

To sum up, with the reasons and examples above, I can safely reach the conclusion that……... Furthermore, I think we not only depend on this university but also need to make donation to build more farming centers……

记得不是很清楚，考完一个月了，大概就是这样。这就已经400多字了。总之，我觉得这个技巧很好，运气也很好。祝大家都考好的分数。

mickeyapple

哪里有作文模版啊

redpassion

http://forum.chasedream.com/dispbbs.asp?boardID=19&ID=26567
这里