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参考了德克的修改连接后,修改的作文,希望德克和大家帮忙再看看^_^

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楼主
发表于 2007-8-26 17:33:00 | 只看该作者

参考了德克的修改连接后,修改的作文,希望德克和大家帮忙再看看^_^

Do you agree or disagree: People can learn more from watching television than reading books.

 

 

 

 

Imagine a man who watch TV for his whole life .What will happen ? Will him obtain the knowledge that how to make a living with specific skills ? Will him learn from the TV set about what the true meaning of life while he is falling  in love with the beautiful actresses Will he be active toward the life with a large amount of friends? I’m afraid I don’t think so . As I know , a multitude of people live under the illusion of the vivid screen of televion . However , from my prospective , books are more attractive .

 

 

To begin with , TV programmes may not show you the exactly approaches to earn for a living . But books do . A Book is an  educationed friends , to a certain extent , who will impact knowledge to you patiently when you get on with him/her . One can expand his interest , by means of hitting books of that specific aspect , besides his major in school . When I am still a sophomore , I learned French on my own , and passed the TEF test a year later , all by reading  books , instead of watching television.

 

 

Moreover , one of the most obvioius benefics of watching television is that TV programmes  can stimulate one’s desire to experience the real meaning of love or  the feeling of expressing their violent tendency ,rather than face with the reality . My little cousins serves as one of the victims . He was addicted to the violent movies and always imagine himself as a killer .

 

 

I can imagine some opposing voices . And we must point out that TV sets can release our pressure of work and study , and it invariably acts as a sourse of happiness . But it is the television that apart  ourselves from out friends and relatives . We become solitude , and occationally we will sense a feeling of loneliness .

 

 

Consequently ,  as far as I am concerned , I don’t think of watching television as a better choice than reading books . Conversely , we can gain more from reading books .


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沙发
发表于 2007-8-28 22:12:00 | 只看该作者

顶一下

明天来

板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2007-8-30 15:29:00 | 只看该作者
怎么还没有见到你啊。。。德克。。。
地板
发表于 2007-8-30 15:36:00 | 只看该作者

在句号和逗号的后面打空格,不要在其前面打空格

5#
 楼主| 发表于 2007-8-30 15:39:00 | 只看该作者

为什么啊?会扣分吗?

6#
发表于 2007-8-30 15:41:00 | 只看该作者

扣分不扣分我不清楚

但是英语写作,都是在逗号和句号后面加空格,而不在他们的前面打空格

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 楼主| 发表于 2007-8-30 15:48:00 | 只看该作者

哦。。好啊,知道了。。。那。。。你什么时候有空帮我改作文啊

 

8#
发表于 2007-8-30 16:19:00 | 只看该作者

lz的文章 逻辑不对吧

你是支持看书的 怎么通篇都在写tv呢?

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 楼主| 发表于 2007-8-30 16:33:00 | 只看该作者
能不能用电视的不好反衬出书的好啊?
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发表于 2007-8-30 17:27:00 | 只看该作者

tef??

what is it?

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