Prep中的代词指代现象

wingkim

In addition to her work on the Miocene hominid fossil record, Mary

(D) Leakey's contributions to archaeology include her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and her painstaking documentation of

正确选项一样有her的指代问题，并不只是句首的介宾短语存在。

还有那题说mice‘s brain when they的，最新的注释一样说明they错误指代所有格。

正确选项一样有her的指代问题，并不只是句首的介宾短语存在。

还有那题说mice‘s brain when they的，最新的注释一样说明they错误指代所有格。

(D) Leakey's contributions to archaeology include her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and her painstaking documentation of

正确选项一样有her的指代问题，并不只是句首的介宾短语存在。

还有那题说mice‘s brain when they的，最新的注释一样说明they错误指代所有格。

正确选项一样有her的指代问题，并不只是句首的介宾短语存在。

还有那题说mice‘s brain when they的，最新的注释一样说明they错误指代所有格。

[此贴子已经被作者于2007-8-21 15:32:25编辑过]

Rohto

以下是引用wingkim在2007-8-21 15:31:00的发言：

In addition to her work on the Miocene hominid fossil record, Mary

(D) Leakey's contributions to archaeology include her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and her painstaking documentation of

正确选项一样有her的指代问题，并不只是句首的介宾短语存在。

还有那题说mice‘s brain when they的，最新的注释一样说明they错误指代所有格。

正确选项一样有her的指代问题，并不只是句首的介宾短语存在。

还有那题说mice‘s brain when they的，最新的注释一样说明they错误指代所有格。

正确选项一样有her的指代问题，并不只是句首的介宾短语存在。

还有那题说mice‘s brain when they的，最新的注释一样说明they错误指代所有格。

(D) Leakey's contributions to archaeology include her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and her painstaking documentation of

正确选项一样有her的指代问题，并不只是句首的介宾短语存在。

还有那题说mice‘s brain when they的，最新的注释一样说明they错误指代所有格。

正确选项一样有her的指代问题，并不只是句首的介宾短语存在。

还有那题说mice‘s brain when they的，最新的注释一样说明they错误指代所有格。

正确选项一样有her的指代问题，并不只是句首的介宾短语存在。

还有那题说mice‘s brain when they的，最新的注释一样说明they错误指代所有格。

(D) Leakey's contributions to archaeology include her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and her painstaking documentation of

正确选项一样有her的指代问题，并不只是句首的介宾短语存在。

还有那题说mice‘s brain when they的，最新的注释一样说明they错误指代所有格。

正确选项一样有her的指代问题，并不只是句首的介宾短语存在。

还有那题说mice‘s brain when they的，最新的注释一样说明they错误指代所有格。

正确选项一样有her的指代问题，并不只是句首的介宾短语存在。

还有那题说mice‘s brain when they的，最新的注释一样说明they错误指代所有格。

No, the correct answer of this question is A. Am I right?

Rohto

In addition to her work on the Miocene hominid fossil record, Mary Leakey contributed to archaeology through her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and through her painstaking documentation of East African cave paintings.

I hear you. You mean in the correct sentence, her and Mary Leakey don't match each other. right?

But in here I think we can ignore the minor error,according to GMAT gramma principles, about prons, as compared to the other big problems, such as parallelism.

Rohto

129.
            (31370-!-item-!-188;#058&004475)

 

In addition to her work on the Miocene hominid fossil record, Mary Leakey contributed to archaeology through her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and through her painstaking documentation of East African cave paintings.

 

(A) Mary Leakey contributed to archaeology through her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and through her painstaking documentation of

(B) Mary Leakey contributed to archaeology by her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and painstakingly documenting

(C) Mary Leakey was a contributor to archaeology by discovering the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and with her painstaking documentation of

(D) Mary Leakey's contributions to archaeology include her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and painstakingly documenting

(E) Mary Leakey's contributions to archaeology include her discovering the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and painstaking documentation of

Idiom: in addition to…（同种题型错了两次，另见大全

56.  Added to the increase in hourly wages requested last July, the railroad employees are now seeking an expanded program of retirement benefits.

(A) Added to the increase in hourly wages requested last July, the railroad employees are now seeking an expanded program of retirement benefits.

(B) Added to the increase in hourly wages which had been requested last July, the employees of the railroad are now seeking an expanded program of retirement benefits.

(C) The railroad employees are now seeking an expanded program of retirement benefits added to the increase in hourly wages that were requested last July.

(D) In addition to the increase in hourly wages that were requested last July, the railroad employees are now seeking an expanded program of retirement benefits.（E）

(E) In addition to the increase in hourly wages requested last July, the employees of the railroad are now seeking an expanded program of retirement benefits.

In addition to?  考察in addition to的用法，前后的主语可以不是一个）

Analysis of 129:

(A) Mary Leakey contributed to archaeology through her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and through her painstaking documentation of

(E) Mary Leakey's contributions to archaeology include her discovering the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and painstaking documentation of

 

Step1: G constructionà A与E的不同在于主干 A: contributed to…through … and through …, E: …include… 两种句型结构表达的意思不同，保持原文意思为优先原则à
        排除D,E; C同理排除

Step2: parallelism: her discovery 和her painstaking documentation的平行 vs. her discovery 和 painstakingly documenting的不平行
            –〉排除B, 选A 

 

小结：in addition to 的可不平行性；名词/动名词的混淆性；E也可用her discovering和painstaking documentation of的不平行排除-我做错的原因就是没有看到这一点，但是如果用G construction的结构优先法则，可以舍去判断这两者的比较。

错误原因：1: in addition to her…为了找平行，选主语所有格，排除了A,B,C; 2. 对抽象名词/动名词形式不敏感。

实质是: In addition to 做prep. Phrase + noun phrase而不是分词结构时, 不存在逻辑主语一致问题

Rohto

我的老毛病又放了，今天竟然有了延考的念头，觉得自己什么都没准备好，，

昨天作GWD-1错了14个，还有争议题含糊不清，也许错得更多，做到33题的时间已经到了，后面一篇阅读几乎全错，

花了大半夜看讨论贴，555，本来晚上要准备作文的。。，这样根本没法完成作文数学准备了

9月20号还要考GRE作文，我要疯了。。，什么都还没有准备。。。

我想要不我考完GRE11月份再考GMAT得了，反正我也不敢着第一轮申请，刚才看到别人的励志贴觉得又不能中途放弃，55

LZ不好意思，借你地方哭诉一下，实在没脸到外面说去，好郁闷那，555

crowkiller

以下是引用Rohto在2007-8-21 16:33:00的发言：

我的老毛病又放了，今天竟然有了延考的念头，觉得自己什么都没准备好，，

昨天作GWD-1错了14个，还有争议题含糊不清，也许错得更多，做到33题的时间已经到了，后面一篇阅读几乎全错，

花了大半夜看讨论贴，555，本来晚上要准备作文的。。，这样根本没法完成作文数学准备了

9月20号还要考GRE作文，我要疯了。。，什么都还没有准备。。。

我想要不我考完GRE11月份再考GMAT得了，反正我也不敢着第一轮申请，刚才看到别人的励志贴觉得又不能中途放弃，55

LZ不好意思，借你地方哭诉一下，实在没脸到外面说去，好郁闷那，555

GWD 刚开始做的时候感觉不好是正常的。而且GWD的争议题多，很多大家讨论会感觉和OG/Prep的套路不完全一致的。

越到最后越要坚持。长夜漫漫，终有黎明的,加油！

wingkim

以下是引用Rohto在2007-8-21 16:05:00的发言：

No, the correct answer of this question is A. Am I right?

no, answer is D

52. (27251-!-item-!-188;#058&003145)
In addition to her work on the Miocene hominid fossil record, Mary Leakey contributed to
archaeology with her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and painstakingly
documenting East African cave paintings.
(A) Leakey contributed to archaeology with her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid
activity and painstakingly documenting
(B) Leakey contributed to archaeology by her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid
activity and by painstakingly documenting
(C) Leakey was a contributor to archaeology with her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of
hominid activity and with her painstaking documentation of
(D) Leakey's contributions to archaeology include her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of
hominid activity and her painstaking documentation of
(E) Leakey's contributions to archaeology include discovering the earliest direct evidence of
hominid activity and painstaking documentation of
考点: 平行对称（Parallelism）
1) and, but等连词出现的时候,一定要注意前后平行
(A) and前后不平行,前者是名词discovery,后者是动名词documenting；with用于此处意思不准确。
(B) and前后不平行,名词discovery和动名词documenting不平行
(C) 使用contributor改变了原句的意思,with意思太广泛,不如include表达意思精确
(D) 正确, and前后平行都是名词discovery, documentation
(E) and前后不平行,前者是动名词discovering,后者是名词documentation
句子结构: In addition to… ,Mary Leakey’s contributions… include her discovery of…and her
painstaking documentation of…

Rohto

52. (27251-!-item-!-188;#058&003145)
In addition to her work on the Miocene hominid fossil record, Mary Leakey contributed to
archaeology with her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and painstakingly
documenting East African cave paintings.
(A) Leakey contributed to archaeology with her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid
activity and painstakingly documenting
(B) Leakey contributed to archaeology by her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid
activity and by painstakingly documenting
(C) Leakey was a contributor to archaeology with her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of
hominid activity and with her painstaking documentation of
(D) Leakey's contributions to archaeology include her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of
hominid activity and her painstaking documentation of
(E) Leakey's contributions to archaeology include discovering the earliest direct evidence of
hominid activity and painstaking documentation of

[此贴子已经被作者于2007-8-22 0:10:19编辑过]

Rohto

129.
   (31370-!-item-!-188;#058&004475)

In addition to her work on the Miocene hominid fossil record, Mary Leakey contributed to archaeology through her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and through her painstaking documentation of East African cave paintings.

In addition to her work on the Miocene hominid fossil record, Mary Leakey contributed to archaeology through her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and through her painstaking documentation of East African cave paintings.

(A) Mary Leakey contributed to archaeology through her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and through her painstaking documentation of

(B) Mary Leakey contributed to archaeology by her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and painstakingly documenting

(C) Mary Leakey was a contributor to archaeology by discovering the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and with her painstaking documentation of

(D) Mary Leakey's contributions to archaeology include her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and painstakingly documenting
   

(E) Mary Leakey's contributions to archaeology include her discovering the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and painstaking documentation of

出题人太阴险了，无语，这题重点不在代词上，sigh

crowkiller

个人的建议：不要在GAMT的代词用法上太花时间，这个和时态是GAMT语法中变化最多，也最没有一定规律的。

两个NN的帖子供大家参考：

http://forum.chasedream.com/dispbbs.asp?BoardID=23&ID=3287

http://forum.chasedream.com/dispbbs.asp?boardid=23&id=43552&star=1#368835