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jose

The foreign country I like the best is France. Firstly, the Pyrenean is located in part of the France. I like the feeling of climbing the huge mountains that it can help me to build the self-confidence and after that I think I can get through any problems in the social life. In my view, there are no problems can compete with climbing the Pyrenean. Secondly, I was born and grow up in the metropolis that I am getting sick of high pressure life style. I like those areas that have less noises and more serenity such as small villages in France. I can take a true relaxation only when I am living in a style of country life.

 

My hometown Shenzhen is a major city located in the south of China and beside the international financial centre Hong Kong. Shenzhen is considered as the most appropriate city for people to live in because it has a fantastic climate and the temperature in Shenzhen has never gone below zero centigrade even in winter. The trees and grasses are always green in the whole year. Besides, Shenzhen has no heavy industries so that the air level is always of high quality here. My hometown is also a modern city which means it has enormous employment opportunities and it is good for young people to come. We are also free to go to HK for shopping or any business intentions.

 

My favorite place in my town is the high school I have studied in. I’d love to go there to play basketball with my friends on weekends or in vacation. The fantastic time in the high school life will bring to my mind unconsciously every time I get into this high school. It is also the best place to spend time with friends because play basketball will not cost much and we can gain a lot of fun. We can relax our body and brain sufficiently through the game after diligent working or studying. Besides, I can improve my teamwork skills by playing the basketball. That skill will play a significant role in the future such as work with colleagues or do group projects.

 

I believe that people I admire/influence me the most are my parents. I think they are the best parents in the world because they have many good personalities. My father is a diligent and honest person. He told me to be honesty to people around me since I am 4 years old. I also learned to work hard from my father and that make me always get good grades from school. My mother is a kind woman. She never beat me after I make any mistakes, instead, she will only tell me I should not do them again and what I should do if I meet the same situation in the future. Those qualities helped me a lot on making friends in the past.

 

In my point of view a good teacher should be responsible and helpful. Firstly, he/she should finish his/her work in time and make it as perfect as he/she can that the students will gain the most proper and correct knowledge. An irresponsible teacher will make negative effects on his/her students such as they cannot gain as much knowledge as those in other schools thus they are in inferior position when they compete with other students in the future. Furthermore, a teacher should be helpful for his/her students that he/she can solve the problems they have and be a role-model in front of the students to influence their behavior.

 

Omnipotence example: two characteristics of a person: Firstly, he is a diligent person that he always tries his best to do his work and most of his assignments are excellent. I admire him so much for this reason because work hard helped him got the best grades in the school and he is respected by his colleagues in the company he is working in. Secondly, he is an honest person that he has never tells any lies to me or his friends. It is fairly hard to do that in the modern society and I do want to be honest to everyone like he did. I think it is an indispensable quality to all human beings if anyone wants to live a happy life.

 

The most unforgettable event in my life is I got the offer of the best university in my hometown. That school is considered as the only bridge to the famous companies in my country so that almost every student in my hometown wants to study in that university. I was extremely happy that time not only because I did a good job on the exam but also I have proved my abilities of study to my friends and relatives. I considered it as a kind of success because I have reached my goal even it is only a step to the real success. I think the feeling after I have seen the result of my several years hard working cannot describe by any human languages.

[此贴子已经被作者于2007-8-3 12:06:10编辑过]

rio

以下是引用jose在2007-8-2 23:27:00的发言：

The foreign country I like the best is France. Firstly, the Pyrenean is located in part of the France. I like the feeling of climbing the huge mountains that it can help me to build the self-confidence and after that I think I can get through any problems in the social life. In my view, there are no problems can compete with to climb(climbing) the Pyrenean. Secondly, I was born and grow up in the huge city(metropolis) so that I am getting sick of high efficient(pressure or something) life style. I like those areas that have less noises and more serenity such as small villages in France. I can take a true relaxation only when I am living in a style of country life.

My hometown Shenzhen is a major city located in the south of China and is beside the international financial centre Hong Kong. Shenzhen is been considered as the most appropriate city for people to live in because it has a fantastic climate that
                    and the temperature in Shenzhen has never gone below zero degree (centigrade) even in winter. The trees and grass (grasses) are always green in the whole year. Because of Shenzhen have no heavy industries so that the air level is always of high quality here. My hometown is also a modern city that it has enormous employment opportunities which is good for young people to come. We are also free to go to HK for shopping or any business intentions.

My favorite place in my town is the high school I have studies in. I always go there to play basketball with my friends in the leisure time. Every time I get into this high school the fantastic time in the high school life will bring to my mind unconsciously. It is also the best place to spend time with friends because play basketball there will not cost much but we can still gain a lot of fun. We can relax our body and brain sufficiently through the game after diligent working or studying. Besides I can improve my teamwork skills by playing the basketball. That skill will play a significant role in the future such as work with colleagues or do group projects.

People I admire/influence me the most are my parents. I think they are the best parents in the world that they have many good personalities. My father is a diligent and honest person. He told me to be honesty to people around me since I am 4 years old. I also learned to work hard from my father and that make me always get good grades from school. My mother is a kind woman plus she is soulful. She never beat me after I make any mistakes, instead, she will only tell me I should not do it again and what I should do if I met the same situation in the future. Those qualities help me made many friends in the past.

In my point of view a good teacher should be responsible and helpful. Firstly, he/she should finish his/her work in time and make it as perfect as he/she can that the students will gain the most proper and correct knowledge. An irresponsible teacher will make negative effects on his/her students such as they cannot gain as much knowledge as those in other school thus they are in inferior position when they compete with others in the future. Furthermore, a teacher should be helpful for his/her students that he/she can solve the problems they have and be a role-model in front of the students to influence their behavior.

Omnipotence example: two characteristics of a person: Firstly, he is a diligent person that he always tries his best to do his work and most of his assignments are excellent. I admire this personality that he has so much because it helped him to get best grades in the school and respected by his colleagues in the company he works in. Secondly, he is an honest person that he almost never tells any lies to me and his friends. It is fairly hard to do that in the modern society and I do want to be honest to everyone like he did. I think it’s an indispensable quality of human beings if anyone wants to live a happy life and have a good career.

The most unforgettable event in my life is I got the admission of the best high school in my hometown. That school is considered as the only bridge to the famous universities in my country so that almost every student in my hometown wants to study in that high school. I was extremely happy that time not only because I pass the entrance exam but also I have proved my abilities of study to people around me. It is a kind of success because of I have reached my goal. I think the feeling after I see the positive result of my several years hard working cannot describe by any human languages. The summer vacation after is also the best vacation I have ever experienced.

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