我不是NN,不过有点看法。
At the annual stockholders meeting, investors heard a presentation on the numerous challenges facing the company, including among them the threat from a rival’s multibillion-dollar patent-infringement suit and the declining sales for the company’s powerful microprocessor chip.
A.including among them the threat from a rival’s multibillion-dollar patentinfringement suit and the declining sales for 这个不用看完就知道不对了,一眼度过去不知道them指代谁,including修饰也不清楚,可以修饰company,可以修饰chanllenge,甚至可以跳跃修饰presentation,又或者更常见的是作为整个句子的伴随状语。
B.which includes the threat of a rival’s multibillion-dollar patent-infringement suit and declining sales of which在这个地方引导非限定从句,也是指代不明,逻辑上应该是指代challenges,但是GMAT喜欢在长句宾语上严格体现平行结构,所以必须是the threat...and the decline....., 不平行的铁错。
C.included among these the threat from a rival’s multibillion-dollar patentinfringement suit as well as a decline in sales for 这个前面错在these不能单独用,后面错在sales 应该跟of才对
D.among them the threat of a rival’s multibillion-dollar patent-infringement suit and the decline in sales of
这个是标准的独立主格结构,名词/代词+介词短语 ,功能上类似于状语,这个地方应该是表示伴随情况。 E.among these the threat from a rival’s multibillion-dollar patent-infringement suit as well as the decline in sales for 这个跟前面的错的地方雷同,多了一个as well as,wordy.
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