再问：OG11上的一题，谢谢~~~

ysl246

49. As an actress and, more importantly, as a teacher of acting, Stella Adler was one of the most influential artists in the American theater, who rained several generations of actors including Marlon Brando and Robert De Niro.

(A) Stella Adler was one of the most influential artists in the American theater, who trained several generations of actors including

(B) Stella Adler, one of the most influential artists in the American theater, trained several generations of actors who include

(C) Stella Adler was one of the most influential artists in the American theater, training several generations of actors whose ranks included

(D) one of the most influential artists in the American theater was Stella Adler, who trained several generations of actors including                                         （C）

(E) one of the most influential artists in the American theater, Stella Adler, trained several generations of actors whose ranks included

这道题B为什么不对？答案是C，但C里面我加亮部分是什么意思？

[此贴子已经被作者于2007-7-19 23:04:16编辑过]

ysl246

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cakemouse

include 必需是过去时态，和主句保持一致

ysl246

以下是引用cakemouse在2007-7-20 12:23:00的发言：
include 必需是过去时态，和主句保持一致

那请问C里面的whose rank是什么用法阿？

amigoanna

那(B) 為甚麼不對？Stella Adler, one....(apposition同位語), trained...
OG上的答案是 This construction, in which the subject
is both preceded and followed by modifiers is awkard.
不了解是甚麼原因不行？ 麻煩知道的人解釋一下 感激不盡
我想好久了～～