GWD1-Q2 Which 的用法到底是怎么回事呢？

CatBoboan

还是这道题，谁能帮忙解释一下D为什么错啊啊？？

GWD1-Q2:

By merging its two publishing divisions, the company will increase their share of the country’s $21 billion book market from 6 percent to 10 percent, a market ranging from obscure textbooks to mass-market paperbacks.

 

A.      their share of the country’s $21 billion book market from 6 percent to 10 percent, a market ranging

B.       from 6 percent to 10 percent its share of the $21 billion book market in the country, which ranges

C.      to 10 percent from 6 percent in their share of the $21 billion book market in the country, a market ranging

D.      in its share, from 6 percent to 10 percent, of the $21 billion book market in the country, which ranges

E.       to 10 percent from 6 percent its share of the country’s $21 billion book market, which ranges

uneverknowba

这个和og11-44对的正好。。。赫赫，相反。当然，题型，语法结构也有区别。

44，The automotive conveyor-belt system, which Henry Ford modeled after an assembly-line technique introduced by Ransom Olds, reduced from a day and a half to 93 minutes the required time of assembling a Model T.

(d) the time required to assemble a Model T from a day and a half to 93 minutes

og解释是： The underlined portion of the original sentence is awkward because the verb 'reduced' is followed by a preposition phrase rather than the direct object 'time'. Changing the structure so that the object immediately follows the verb, 'reduced the time', also allows an idiomatic error to be corrected.

gwd这题我的感觉是句子结构问题，和effectiveness

同位语指前面的market，应该表示解释说明，可前面book market已经出现过了。后面就是重复。此处用同位语就是wordy， redundent。要解释的就是market，定从合适。同时没有歧义要求就近修饰，book market放句末，后逗号+which

不过这个真是看菜吃饭了。感觉和og对于44题的分析还是有些矛盾。不过这里主考点感觉还是同位语使用不当的问题。。。。

我真罗嗦

uneverknowba

btw，之前只看到E，可是B为什么不对？

我怎么觉得B比E好。

smartsky11

S

Isabel820

E