帮忙修改一下呀，写给招生办的信。

落叶无声

Admission officer:

 

I’m applying to the Master of Business Administration program for Fall Session 2007, and my student ID is ＃＃＃＃.

 

I have received an email from you and am recommended to provide all documents by the 2nd JuLY, 2007. I have delivered all documents except GMAT score. I estimate my GMAT score is 660.

 

I’ll take GMAT test on 4th July, 2007, and then fax the unofficial score to you when I complete the test.

 

Could you kindly delay the deadline to  4th July, 2007 ? .

 

Yours sincerely

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谁帮修改一下？，能否再加点套瓷的话（是叫套瓷吧，就是讨好的话）谢谢了  :-)