大全987-73

JorieSong

以下是引用chamcham在2007-6-13 16:30:00的发言：

T-4-Q41:
    大全987-73

Alaska regularly deposits some of its profits from the sale of oil into a special fund, with the intention to sustain the state’s economy after the exhaustion of its oil reserves.

(A) fund, with the intention to sustain the state’s economy after the exhaustion of its oil reserves

(B) fund, the intention of which is to sustain the state’s economy after they have exhausted their oil reserves

(C) fund intended to sustain the state’s economy after oil reserves are exhausted

(D) fund intended to sustain the state’s economy after exhausting its oil reserves

(E) fund that they intend to sustain the state’s economy after oil reserves are exhausted

The answer is C, which I am not entirely sure. Any NN can explain why not A, only because it is wordy? 

A With 作独立主格结构，不能接不定式。 请看下面（摘自 Prep 语法笔记_V1.00_35_解释)：

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The continental United States receives an average of 30 inches of precipitation a year; transpiration

from soil and from plants returns approximately 21 of the 30 inches to the atmosphere, while the

balance of 9 inches contributes to the flow of streams and rivers.

(A) transpiration from soil and from plants returns approximately 21 of the 30 inches to theatmosphere, while the balance of 9 inches contributes to the flow

(B) even though transpiration from soil and from plants returns approximately 21 of the 30 inches tothe atmosphere, the remainder of 9 inches contribute to the flowing

(C) although transpiration from soil and from plants return approximately 21 of the 30 inches to theatmosphere, the balance of 9 inches contribute to the flowing

(D) with transpiration from soil and from plants to return approximately 21 inches to the atmosphere,the rest of the 9 inches contributes to the flow

(E) as transpiration from soil and from plants return approximately 21 of the 30 inches to theatmosphere, the rest of the 9 inches contribute to the flow

考点:主谓一致（Agreement） 有效用词（Diction）

:主谓一致（Agreement） 有效用词（Diction）

1) 动词能用单词本身表示名词形式的,就不要用the + -ing形式来表达名词形式

2) as的用法:as + n表示作为… , as + 主语+谓语表示动作之间进行比较

3) with 的用法:

with 型独立主格,与主句形成紧密的逻辑联系,形式为:

with + n. + -ed/ing形式; with + n. + adj.; with + n. + 介词短语 作状语修饰前一个分句的动作类型词 例:Visitors to the park have often looked into the leafy canopy and seen monkeys sleeping on the branches, with arms and legs hanging like socks on a clothesline. with引导的独立主格作状语就近修饰sleeping

(A) 正确,两个动词returns和contributes都与主语一致,并列用两个并列的句子清晰的表现了降水回归自然的两种途径.

(B) 主谓不一致,the remainder应该用单数谓语形式,contribute应该改为contributes; flow本身就是名词形式,不需要用the flowing来表现名词形式.

(C) 主谓不一致,return应该改为returns,同时contribute应该改为contributes; the flowing应该改为theflow.

(D) 介词with后面不能跟不定式to do,并且将两个并列成分改变为主从成分,从而改变了原句的意思.

(E) as使用有误,句子本意并不是对两个动作进行比较,而是称述两个事实;主谓不一致:return和

contribute均要改为单数形式.

句子结构: 句子;transpiration…returns…, while the balance contributes to…

: 句子;transpiration…returns…, while the balance contributes to…

补充说明: 实在中碰到with结构要提高警惕,这是一个频率比较高的考点,并且常常有迷惑性.更多的情况下只能从逻辑意思着手.

: 实在中碰到with结构要提高警惕,这是一个频率比较高的考点,并且常常有迷惑性.更多的情况下只能从逻辑意思着手.

shakepig

为什么不选D呢？想不通。。。

lychee1842

我是觉得

intended 肯定比intention要好的

最开始我选错是因为没弄清楚Intended究竟是做定语修饰谁，

不过仔细一看，这个intended就是非常确定以及肯定修饰前面fund的，所以隔着个逗号紧跟着它肯定没错

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