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(Just as Confucius, the greatest philosopher and educator in ancient China, once commented,“art and music can purify human souls and lead us to a spiritual world lies beyond.” In the light of this noble sage’s guide, music and art have tremendously salutary impacts on students and virtually they do have, hence my perspective-every student should, more or less, be required to learn art and music)

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As Confucius, the greatest philosopher and educator living in the Chunqiu period of ancient China, commented," act and music can purify students' thought". According to this noble sage, music and act have tremendously salutary impacts on student's lives. I do strong support with his idea.

(Just as Confucius, the greatest philosopher and educator in ancient China, once commented,“art and music can purify human souls and lead us to a spiritual world lies beyond.” In the light of this noble sage’s guide, music and art have tremendously salutary impacts on students and virtually they do have, hence my perspective-every student should, more or less, be required to learn art and music)

 

For starters, music and art has beneficial influence on students' language abilities. In the light of a survey, it is a direct correlation that between improved language scores and the length of time spent studying the arts and music. Students who have had school music classes or act(art) classes scored 52 higher on the verbal portion of their SATs than those without arts or music instructions. Arts and music. The result of better language abilities(capabilities), obviously, is responsible for students' improved school grades and better adjusted social behavior.

(For one thing, as a matter of fact, art and music can influence students’ language capability positively a great deal. In the light of a survey, there is a direct correlation between improved language scores and the length of time spent on arts and music. Amazingly, those who are required to learn art and music in school achieve an average 52 points lead than those who are not in the verbal portion of SAT. Such a tangible improvement, more or less, could boil down to the art and music study. Consequently, art and music help students in their academic study therefore I deem it as something must-learn in school)

 

Moreover, art and music also can
            contribute significantly to children's intellectual development(我个人认为,提升语言和提升智力有等同的地方). My best friend Jerry, a freshman in Yale, is a perfect(quintessential也可以) case in point. A is said, he has learned violin for ten years. That experience proved to be of crucial(形容importance前面一般加paramount) importance in his study of philosophy and math. Reasoning(Concluding) that the instruction of violin can stimulate his rational thinking skills. Furthermore, many very best engineers(a multitude of the top engineers) and technical designers in the silicon valley industry are, nearly without exception, practicing musicians(对此我表示怀疑.在举例的时候,可以说有很多,但最好不说几乎所有.因为人家的information和我们的可能不同,而且人家在美国.).

(Moreover, art and music can also contribute significantly to one’s intellectual development. My best friend Jerry, a freshman in Yale, is just a quintessential case in point. Just as mentioned, he has been learning violin for more than a decade. This experience, as he said seriously, proved to be of paramount importance in his study of philosophy and mathematics, concluding that the instruction of the violin exerts some stimulation of his rational thinking. Furthermore, a multitude of the top engineers and technical designers in the silicon valley are practicing musicians.)

 

Last but not the least, viewing art and listening to music are optimal ways for students to reduce their academic pressures(To such two important reasons, another must be added-appreciating art and classical music, as many of us believe, is the optimal avenue to release students’ stress in academic study.). To give a demonstration,  when I am stressed by exams(Every time when I am under the intense pressure resulted form the coming exams), listening to Avril's CDs is as the best activity it is as is held by myself. I find that this activity to be effectively soothing and calming. Likewise, enjoying painting can have a similar effect. Especially, when I  lose(immerse) myself in paintings, I can feel enormous relax(enormous relax?可能用错了).

It is essential, consequently, that studying art and music in secondary school can be nothing but positive(can be nothing but这样的句子少来) for all students. art and music can not only spark students' potential but also help students relax themselves.  

lixiaosr

thank you very much 你认为多少分

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4.0-5.0

lixiaosr

是可能4上了还是一样4中下

（4.0-5.0）为了鼓励我

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中左右吧!