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Issue: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most important aspect of a job is the money a person earns. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Money is not everything, but the life without money is nothing. The scene that graduate students who are just willing to grab a small job getting crowded in the examinations held by companies is not isolated, and more evidence seems to point to the fact that the most crucial aspect of a job is the money a person earns. However, contrary to this widely accepted idea, I believe the most important aspect is not the money matter.

 

The income is never the terminal goal; that is, the money we earn is always for us to achieve some expectations that acquire the money as essential factors. For instance, girls love money not because their fever of counting the cash but the attraction of delicate jewelries and trendy dresses. No doubt the influence of income is limit; Bill Gates’ large sum of money is just a mathematical matter not a practical case, and earning that money is never his goal and the content of his job and success.

 

Comparing with money factor, abundant elements have much more significant effects. The favor in doing the work and the self-satisfaction are usually considered as the aim, or the determining aspects of a job. Constantly, people devoted more to their work when they are dealing with the issues that they are eager to challenge; and that implies the truth that money is certainly not the most important aspect of a job.

 

It comes to no surprise that money is slipping away from the heaven it used to stand on, and the explanation is not complicated; that is, people are the animals that are not greedy for money but aware of the living conditions and human basic emotions’ satisfaction. We admit that money is so essential that we can not neglect it, nevertheless, judging money as the most important aspect of a job is the tragedy of life.