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5月12 北美IBTWriting
Do you agree with the following statement: Getting university education is the most important factor for success in life.

Today, more and more people are entering universities to search for new knowledge in some field, develop their learning and communicating skills, and shape their understanding of the world. As a result, I believe that it is essential for a person to get university education. When comes to the question: whether university education is the most crucial factor of a person's success. I could not agree with it more.

The number one key reason why getting university education plays so significant a role in one's success is that it enriches our knowledge about one field. A solid knowledge promises our success .Because if we want to succeed in completing an important task, first of all, only after gaining an overall understanding about the background of the task, then, can we bring about an efficient solution to figure out the problem. So it is essential for us to get a solid knowledge

In addition, a good university education can develop our skills and capability to make us outstanding in the competitive world in the future. University education not just tells us how to study but teaches us how to communicate with others well, how to cooperate with others efficiently and other vital skills. These abilities are all key factors in our process of success.

Finally, getting university education assists us to get in touch with more people such as professors and other students. This is a valuable wealth for us to succeed in the future when we have a job. A good relationship with our classmates makes us gain a wealth of useful information, also when we come across tough work, we can turn to our friends for help and listening their advice.

In conclusion, I propose that the point that getting university education is the most precious experience for us to succeed. University education enriches our knowledge in some field, and university education strengthens our abilities and skills. Also university education makes us get in touch with more people.

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