She became thinner and exhausted when I saw her two months later. There is much homework on her desk(这里就可以来一个具体的描写了: Every day, she does nothing but frantically immerses herself into the hell of assignment and academic books which have covered her desk, utterly, with no space for even a cup of coffee.). She signed and told me that she tried her best but still couldn’t(在TOEFL写作中不要用缩写!)
Studying together with them enables(并不是不跟他们学习你就不能够学many things, enable是给某人能力的意思,这里好好体会,如果你这里用enable,就是表示你在和他们学习之前你没有学习的能力,这里enable的使用显然是不好的,最好用没有争议的:provides one with the opportunities) you to learn many things(to learn from them in many ways在很多的方面向他们学习) and improve yourself though you might not get the top(highest) grades. Firstly, you must be capable to adapt the difficult classes and pass the exams. Otherwise, you’ll get in trouble by yourself.(不要用缩写,这里再次提醒你)
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