请教Prep 1-111

floraxycn

111. (30445-!-item-!-188;#058&004235)

Hans Christian Andersen wrote fairy tales, which have been some of the most frequently translated works in literary history, while he wrote plays, novels, poems, and travel books, as well as several autobiographies, which remained almost unknown outside his native Denmark.

(A) Hans Christian Andersen wrote fairy tales, which have been some of the most frequently translated works in literary history, while he wrote plays, novels, poems, and travel books, as well as several autobiographies, which remained

(B) Hans Christian Andersen wrote fairy tales, which, while among the most frequently translated works in literary history, his plays, novels, poems, and travel books, as well as several autobiographies remain

(C) Even as Hans Christian Andersen's fairy tales have been among the most frequently translated works in literary history, still his plays, novels, poems, and travel books, as well as several autobiographies, remain

(D) Unlike the fairy tales written by Hans Christian Andersen, which are some of the most frequently translated works in literary history, he wrote plays, novels, poems, and travel books, as well as several autobiographies, which remained

(E) Although Hans Christian Andersen wrote fairy tales that are among the most frequently translated works in literary history, his plays, novels, poems, and travel books, as well as several autobiographies, remain

答案是E, 请问C是错在even as不对吗？还是其他哪里不对？谢谢！

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popray

感觉still应该放在remain前面，副词修饰动词

tangzimo

以下是引用floraxycn在2007-5-11 18:11:00的发言：

111. (30445-!-item-!-188;#058&004235)

Hans Christian Andersen wrote fairy tales, which have been some of the most frequently translated works in literary history, while he wrote plays, novels, poems, and travel books, as well as several autobiographies, which remained almost unknown outside his native Denmark.

(A) Hans Christian Andersen wrote fairy tales, which have been some of the most frequently translated works in literary history, while he wrote plays, novels, poems, and travel books, as well as several autobiographies, which remained

(B) Hans Christian Andersen wrote fairy tales, which, while among the most frequently translated works in literary history, his plays, novels, poems, and travel books, as well as several autobiographies remain

(C) Even as Hans Christian Andersen's fairy tales have been among the most frequently translated works in literary history, still his plays, novels, poems, and travel books, as well as several autobiographies, remain

(D) Unlike the fairy tales written by Hans Christian Andersen, which are some of the most frequently translated works in literary history, he wrote plays, novels, poems, and travel books, as well as several autobiographies, which remained

(E) Although Hans Christian Andersen wrote fairy tales that are among the most frequently translated works in literary history, his plays, novels, poems, and travel books, as well as several autobiographies, remain

答案是E, 请问C是错在even as不对吗？还是其他哪里不对？谢谢！

Ｃ：

as在这里是连词，连词as不能表示让步的语气。

让步句用现在完成时没有道理。

个人认为still与remain重复。

miffycn

以下是引用tangzimo在2007-5-11 23:55:00的发言：

Ｃ：

as在这里是连词，连词as不能表示让步的语气。

让步句用现在完成时没有道理。

个人认为still与remain重复。

我同意楼上这个观点．．．！！

filman

以下是引用floraxycn在2007-5-11 18:11:00的发言：

111. (30445-!-item-!-188;#058&004235)

Hans Christian Andersen wrote fairy tales, which have been some of the most frequently translated works in literary history, while he wrote plays, novels, poems, and travel books, as well as several autobiographies, which remained almost unknown outside his native Denmark.

(A) Hans Christian Andersen wrote fairy tales, which have been some of the most frequently translated works in literary history, while he wrote plays, novels, poems, and travel books, as well as several autobiographies, which remained

(B) Hans Christian Andersen wrote fairy tales, which, while among the most frequently translated works in literary history, his plays, novels, poems, and travel books, as well as several autobiographies remain

(C) Even as Hans Christian Andersen's fairy tales have been among the most frequently translated works in literary history, still his plays, novels, poems, and travel books, as well as several autobiographies, remain

(D) Unlike the fairy tales written by Hans Christian Andersen, which are some of the most frequently translated works in literary history, he wrote plays, novels, poems, and travel books, as well as several autobiographies, which remained

(E) Although Hans Christian Andersen wrote fairy tales that are among the most frequently translated works in literary history, his plays, novels, poems, and travel books, as well as several autobiographies, remain

答案是E, 请问C是错在even as不对吗？还是其他哪里不对？谢谢！

对于A项的错误之一，语法笔记上说“which引导非限定性定于从句，在本句中不恰当，应该用that引导限定性定于从句。”

不明白为什么。请高人指点。

smartsky11

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xiaoniuren

ding

没办法1987

用非限定从句有这样的含义：这个人写的所有的fairly story都是have been some of the most frequently translated works in literary history。

而用限定性从句是指这个人的一些作品are among the most frequently translated works in literary history，并不代表全部都是，更加符合逻辑

抽象的说非限定：A，which B是说所有的A都具有B性质

               限定：A that B 是说具有B性质的A，不一定所有的A都具有B性质

双鱼游

从Manhattan论坛学到的，while使用错误，
(A) Hans Christian Andersen wrote fairy tales, which have been some of the most frequently translated works in literary history,while he wrote plays, novels, poems, and travel books, as well as several autobiographies, which remained....
黄色部分是修饰部分，去掉不影响句意，while的使用方法有两种情况：1，表示两件事情同时发生；2，表示事件对比，但是去掉黄色的部分，比较的两件事成了Andersen 写 童话书 和 戏剧，小说等，而正确选项比较的是他写这些书的受欢迎程度，所以错。
C选项even as使用时应该 主从句应用相同时态，同时still 应该放在动词前。再者
(C) Even as Hans Christian Andersen's fairy tales have been among the most frequently translated works in literary history, still his plays, novels, poems, and travel books, as well as several autobiographies, remain

(E) Although Hans Christian Andersen wrote fairy tales that are amongthe most frequently translated works in literary history, his plays, novels, poems, and travel books, as well as several autobiographies,remain
根据平行对称，还是E好