請教各位 PP的這題

cohika

The Nobel Prize in chemistry was awarded to three scientists for their discovery that plastic can be made
        electrically conductive -- an advance that has led to improments in film, television screens, and windows.

B.that plastic can be made electrically conductive--this advance leading

C.that plastic can be made to be electrically conductive, and this advance led 

D.of plastic's ability to be made electrically conductive, with this advance leading

E.of plastic being able to be made electricall conductive--an advance that has led

答案是A

我想請問, C是不是錯在this advance 前面要有that 平行? 可是this advance 是延伸前句而來,也要單別做為discovery的一項嗎? 還是只是語法平行的問題所以要加that..and that

我有同學說是this 出了問題,不可以用this advance代

想請教大大的意見

遥远的绿洲

C错误有2

1 be made to be多余,be made就足够了

2 and 连词用的不好,这里没有并列的关系

楼主说的that...and that的说法不对,discovery that... 的that引导的是同位语从句,其作用是扩展discovery的内容,而and that this advance...并不是discovery的扩展内容,因此不能用that... and that

cohika

謝謝樓上大大!! 還有上面pp兩題方便請教