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楼主
发表于 2007-4-21 08:54:00 | 只看该作者

有没有好一点的英文事例?我总觉得自己写的...

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沙发
发表于 2007-4-21 09:38:00 | 只看该作者
口语题吗
板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2007-4-21 09:55:00 | 只看该作者

不是,是Independent Writing

  我最近写了蛮多,越写越觉得自己用的例子很烂.麻烦看一下好吗?谢谢!

http://forum.chasedream.com/dispbbs.asp?boardID=19&ID=235548&page=1

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地板
发表于 2007-4-21 10:06:00 | 只看该作者

科技:

Compaq Computers

__The profitability of a company is related to the quality and efforts of its workers. Therefore, a direct relationship between job performance and reward makes work more meaningful.

__has an unusual low turnover rate among its employees.

    Like most companies in the computer field, Compaq expects its people to work long and hard to achieve big results quickly. In many companies, an atmosphere of constant push would inspire people to seek employment with less pressure somewhere else. Instead, people stay with Compaq. The company's culture emphasizes individule responsibilities for results and high respect for individuals. Compaq benefits from creating opportunities for employees to perform to the best of their potential and to be rewarded for their achievements.

 

The Land's End Company, Wisconsin

__offers its employees the possibility of trying a new job temporarily without losing their current position. If they like the work, they can request an official transfer.

__In today's ever-changing workplace, very few workers expect to stay in the same job for their whole life. They expect opportunities to expand their knowledge and experience.To avoid boredom and to increase their capabilities, they want to try different kinds of work. They also expect ongoing job training that makes them maketable both inside and outside the company.

 

AT&T creates a very negative impression when it laid off thousands of workers in a year of profits.

Texaco's failure to handle racial discrimination within its own ranks will remain in the public consciousness for years.

__prospective employees are reluctant to join a company that has a history of treating its people badly. Investors are also watching company carefully because the connection between a stable workforce and profitability has been made quite clear.

__a number of companies in news now know all too well the public impact on internal decision

__employees, investors and consumers now are also beginning to judge companies by how they deal with issues like ethnic diversity, harassment, hiring and firing, profit sharing and other management/labor policies.

 

Hearst Corporation

__celebrate differences among people and make active use of the varied perspectives that workers from different backgrounds bring to the job.

__celebrates the unique talents and contributions of all its employees, whether they are high-profile reporters, secretaries, or operators of printing presses.

__when someone at Hearst does something worthy of recognition, flowers are sent to the employee's spouse.Really special contributions call for a small gifts from a prestigious department store.

__Receiving the gifts at home brings the family into the celebration and help connect the worlds of home life and work experience.

 

Mitsubishi Electric

__no longer looks to grow bigger simply by acquiring more and more companies as subsidiaries. Instead, it engages in cooperative joint ventures with many others. Each company retains its independence, its speciality, and its core competence. Together they benefit from their diversity.

__none of us is whole. we need each other to fill in our gaps.

 

3M_Minnesota Manufacturing and Mining Company

__If Dick Drew had listened to his boss in 1925, we might not have a product that we now think of as practically essential: masking tape.

__At work, he developed a sticky-side substance strong enough to hold things together.

__3M learned from its mistake: Now it encourages people to spend 15 percent of their work time just thinking and developing new ideas.

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发表于 2007-4-21 10:07:00 | 只看该作者

成功:

When Bill Gates made his decision to drop out from Harvard, he did not care too much of the result. Gates entered Harvard in 1973, and dropped out two years later when he and Allen started the engine of Microsoft. Many people did not understand why Gates gave up such a good opportunity to study in the world’s No.1 University. However, with size comes power, Microsoft dominates the PC market with its operating systems, such as MS-DOS and Windows. Now, Microsoft becomes the biggest software company in the world and Bill Gates becomes the richest man in the world.

We can learn from the experience of the great inventor Thomas Alva Edison that sometimes a series of apparent failures is really a precursor to success. The voluminous personal papers of Edison reveal that his inventions typically did not spring to life in a flash of inspiration but evolved slowly from previous works.

Mother Teresa, winner of the Nobel Peace Prize, dedicated the majority of her life to helping the poorest of the poor in India, thus gaining her the name "Saint of the Gutters." The devotion towards the poor won her respect throughout the world and the Nobel Peace Prize in 1979. She founded an order of nuns called the Missionaries of Charity in Calcutta, India dedicated to serving the poor. Almost 50 years later, the Missionaries of Charity have grown from 12 sisters in India to over 3,000 in 517 missions throughout 100 countries worldwide.
Lady Diana Spencer,
Princess of Whales, is remembered and respected by people all over the world more for her beauty, kindness, humanity and charitable activities than for her technical skills.

Mandela, the South African black political leader and former president, was awarded 1993 Nobel Peace Prize for his efforts to antiracism and antiapartheid. Nelson Mandela is one of the great moral and political leaders of our time: an international hero whose lifelong dedication to the fight against racial oppression in South Africa won him the Nobel Peace Prize and the presidency of his country. Since his triumphant release in 1990 from more than a quarter-century of imprisonment, Mandela has been at the centre of the most compelling and inspiring political drama in the world. As president of the African National Congress and head of South Africa's antiapartheid movement, he was instrumental in moving the nation toward multiracial government and majority rule. He is revered everywhere as a vital force in the fight for human rights and racial equality.

Beethoven
Beethoven, the German Composer, began to lose his hearing in 1801 and was entirely deaf by 1819. However, this obstacle could not keep him from becoming one of the most famous and prolific composers in art history. His music, including 9 symphonies, 5 piano concertos, several senates and so on, formes a transition from classical to romantic composition.

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发表于 2007-4-21 10:08:00 | 只看该作者

个人:

Mr. Lesson was accused of losing 1.3 billon dollars as a result of a risky derivative investment with the potential of a 27-billon gain. The collapse of Barings Bank in 1995 has been one of the most spectacular events in the banking world in recent years. Banks solvency and liquidity can be significantly threatened if speculative trading in financial derivatives is guided by a lack of adequate internal and external controls. There is evidence that such reasons are responsible for the failure of Barings in February 1995.

Recently, many multi-national companies, such as Cisco and Yahoo, stimulate the employees’ morale by offering stock options to their employees. Stock option provides a chance for employees to become the shareholders of the company. As the result, the interest and profit of the company is tightly connected with the employees’ interest and income.

Many firms adopt “Profit-Related-Pay” contracts (PRP contracts) and pay wages at levels that vary with firms’ profits. Many studies suggest that firms adopting PRP contracts show productivity per worker higher than that of their competitors who used more traditional contracts. The reason behind is that PRP contracts greatly change individual workers’ relationships to the firm, connecting their interest with firms’ interest.

The greater the division of labor in an economy, the greater the need for communication and coordination. This is because increased division of labor entails a larger number of specialized producers, which results in a greater number of disruptions of supply and production.

An employer looking for long-term employees may be better served by hiring applicants with broad background. By way of their more general education, these applicants have acquired a variety of general and transferable skills. They may be more suitable than their business-background colleagues to solve general management problems, deal with business associates from different cultures and view issues at a variety of aspects. In general, the employees with broad background can accustom to changes more quickly than their business-majored colleagues.

Daimler Chrysler, one of the most successful automobile companies in the world, contributes significantly to the local employment of Stuttgart, Germany.

Philip Morris, the largest tobacco company in the world, has been sued by government and many other groups for producing products that are harmful to health. The fines and legal fees that have resulted from the legal attacks against the company have costed the company substantial amounts of money.

Bayer, one of the largest pharmaceutic companies in the world, announced that the company would cease production of one of its major products, because of the hazardous ingredients it contained. By doing so, the company suffers great loss on profitability, but gains strong public support and understanding, which can contribute to the long-term success of the company.

Mitsubishi Motors had concealed significant defects in the break system of Pajero, one of the company’s major products, before apologized to public. Hundreds of car accidents were directly caused by the break error. Thus, the company suffered a great goods return, losing not only the market share but also the confidence of consumers.

Henry Ford’s factory was so efficient that by 1926 a new “model-T” cost only $310, one-third the price of the original 1908 model.

Discriminating services may cause misunderstanding and unpleasant result. The best example is Toshiba, one of the largest Japanese companies. In 2000, the Company announced that among notebook computers it produced, one model had serious defect. Users in North America could choose either replacements with an upgraded model or full refund. However, no such offer for users in China. Chinese users were outrage at the company’s discrimination and refused to use any of Toshiba’s notebook computers. What the company lost is not only the temporary revenue but also the consumer’s confidence, which contribute to the long-term success of the company.

Compared with government officers, private corporation managers must pay more attention to efficiency and effectiveness of their decisions. Normally, maximizing profitability is not the primary goal of government owned enterprises and governmental planning, so that many unrealistic decisions may be resulted. It is the hidden reason that many government owned enterprises become profitable after the privatisations.

Traditionally, the first firm to commercialise a new technology has benefited from unique opportunity to shape product definitions, forcing followers to adapt to a standard or invest in an unproven alternative. Today, however, the largest payoffs may go to companies that lead in developing integrated approaches for successful mass production and distribution. For example, SEGA, producer of Saturn, was the first company to develop home video game machine commercially, but Sony Entertainment INC., producer of Play Station, proved to be more successful at forming strategic alliance with other producers and distributors to manufacture and market its hardware and software. Because consumers had more choices on Play Station’s games, they seldom bought SEGA Saturn. By the end of the 1990’s, Play Station dominated the home video game market while SEGA Saturn was no longer in production.

The financial crash of October 1987 and the Asia Economic Crisis in 1998 demonstrate that the world’s capital markets are more closely integrated than ever before and that events in one part of the global village may be transmitted to the rest of the village—almost instantaneously.

The fact that in many corporations employees are being replaced by automated equipment in order to save money does not mean our lives are becoming worse. After all, it is the automation that boosts the industrial revolution, which in turn, creates thousands of hundreds more positions than in the past. If the corporations cannot improve its profitability, many more people will lost their jobs ultimately.

As the economic role of multinational, global corporations expands, the international economic environment will be shaped increasingly not by governments or international institutions, but by the interaction between governments and global corporations.

Traditionally, people think that companies are set up for making profit, not for saving our planet. Today, however, more and more multinational companies adopt the Corporate Social Responsibility Policy (CSR policy). These companies pay more attention to the social problems, from employee minimum wage to environment issues. On the one hand, these companies do not want people to protest in front of the office buildings; on the other hand, a good public image does help the companies promote their products to consumers.

The interview is an essential part of a successful firing program because with it, job applicants who have personalities that are unsuited to the requirements of the job will be eliminated from consideration.

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发表于 2007-4-21 10:10:00 | 只看该作者

1:科技类

1):Wills carrier air condition ,作用大家自己想吧,没空调是不是INDUSTRY都得关门了,大机器也别转了, 硅谷也挂了就

2):开普勒的行星三大定律(行星运动受太阳控制),哥白尼,伽利略当时都不解.

3):有兴趣才能干成事,比如哥白尼不学医学天文了,因此才有了日心说.

4):有怀疑是好的

还说小哥同志吧,在罗马大学任教时对天体理论产生怀疑因此有了他的<天体运动论>,牛顿也是的啊,怀疑才有了GRAVITY

5):发明是偶然得来的

阿基米德洗澡时发现浮力(BUOYANCY buoyancy)

看见壶里水开了造了蒸汽船那个牛人是谁

6):谁说历史没有用

牛顿正是对开普勒,哥白尼,伽利略,布鲁诺等人的理论进行了研究才发现了他的力学三大定律和万有引力.

7):伟大的人是要后人去评价的

巴斯德发明高温消毒法别人都说他是疯子,BELL发明电话的时候别人说是玩具,然而他们的贡献只有我们这些后人才能理解

 

2:政治类

1)华盛顿受人拥戴,可他干了两界绝对不干了,还落下个好名声(这个例子有篇ISSUELEADER需要三年还是五年换一下能用上)

2)肯尼迪Kennedy拨了240亿美元给阿波罗号Apollo,让人类完成了EXPLORE THE MOON(这个还能用到说POLITICAL LEADER 应该坚持自己的原则那个ISSUE)

3)POLITICAL LEADER的人品更重要,比如WASHINGTON CUT THE CHEERY TREE AND SAIDI CAN NOT TELL A LIE.

4)HITLER太专制了

5)克林顿的性丑闻(公众人物被MASS MEDIA报道的ISSUE中用)

6)戴安娜王妃的车祸多半是被记者逼的,其次王妃的人格魅力,比如KINDNESS AND BOUYALTY POLITICAL LEADER的人格问题的ISSUE中用

 

3:艺术类

1):比奇特尔建筑不考虑规模,地点,类型,为任何人建造任何建筑.他的构想当时人也不理解(可用于一个人的成就需要后人去评价的问题中)

Sydney Opera – eggshell

2):有理想才有现实/艺术反映心灵等的ISSUE        问题中

迪斯尼的米老鼠和唐老鸭为以后的美国人塑造了生活,思考,和实现梦想的方式

Forrest Gump—run to the destination without hesitate

3):毕加索
            
在照相机使绘画陷入困境的时候大胆的创造了抽象作品.

4):BIG BELL

用于古建筑不能拆的问题中,因为it is still one of the important parts of English lives.

5):BANK OF CHINA TOWER

Buildings represent our intellectual and business behavior.你说那能拆么!

 

4:教育类和学习类

1):交叉学科的重要性

用于好多个类似的ISSUE题目,比如一个领域需要别的领域的专家去把他们的知识带进来等等.比如:生化,物化,经济中的运筹,统计等等

Von Neumann architecture

Nash equilibrium

2):教育学生要交给他们方法,而不是单纯灌输,否则没有新的THEORIES产生了. SPECIAL AND GENERAL THEORY OF RELATIVITY GRAVITY 还有FREE FALL等都可以举

3):家长教育孩子的重要性,比如爱因斯坦他那伟大的叔叔(关于爱因斯坦,大家看第二部分花语语的特殊贡献部分)

还有比如THE ART OF WAR 或者UNCLE TOMS CABINE 这些著作大家也得知道.

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发表于 2007-4-21 10:11:00 | 只看该作者

教育和学习:

 

Edison had ever been regard as a changeling while he has contribute so much to human being and no one would doubt about his intelligence.

 

One need look no further than the famous Einstein-Bohr Debate on determinacy-indeterminacy of quantum theories.

On the one hand, Einstein believed that quantum physics would eventually be replaced by a more determinate theory. Bohr, on the other hand, accepted the finality of the probability-based quantum theory.

Their debate brought about chaos theory, which finally solved the debate by proposing wave-particle duality.

When viewed from this perspective, the Einstein-Bohr debate evaporates. Depending on which part of the spiral we look, Bohr or Einstein will appear correct.

 

when the government plans to build a dam, experts from different disciplines may be aggregated to discuss about the plan. In the discussion, it is quite possible that those experts may have contrasting points of view. The hydrologist claims that the dam would be significant in combating drought and flood; the geologist concludes that the project may be infeasible as earthquakes are frequent in this region; the economist infers that the project must be quite helpful to solve the problems of electric power deficit, and the local economics would benefit much; and the ecologist and archaeologist may disagree with the project, because building such a dam may be perilous to some species and historic relics in the ambient regions.

 

Perhaps the region chosen by the hydraulician is the habitat of many rare species, and thus the project would probably cause species extinction; or in the ambient region there are many priceless historic relics, which may be damaged by the project.

 

计算机科学

In study of up to date deep-submicrometer semiconductor technology, for example, physics helps to explain quantum effect which tends to be more and more dominant in the device behaviors; materials science plays crucial role in device packaging and photoresist; and mathematics enhances the abilities of simulating software which help predict the characteristics of the integrated circuits before the chips are put into production.

Moreover, recently computer science research is increasingly related with more other disciplines, such as electrical engineering, mechanical engineering, biology, linguistics, and even psychology, in the applications of biochip, voice recognition, artificial intelligence and so on.

 

教员要关注社会/工业界发展

For instance, it is beneficial for a professor who teaches Electronic engineering to be active in industrial world as well. Therefore, he can always keep conscious about the major difference of research directions in industrial world and academic world, and he can refine his courses in time to make it keep pace with the industrial advancement. Consequently, the students can learn more practical knowledge and instructions from the faculty, and benefit themselves when they step into society after graduation.

 

海王星Neptune的发现

After the planet Uranus had been discovered, a Cambridge mathematician, Adams, predicted the existence of an unseen planet, to account for the fact that Uranus was being pulled slightly out of position in its orbit. According to Isaac Newton's theory of gravitation, Adams attributed this pull to the gravitational effect of an unknown body, and calculated its position. One year later (September 1846), this new planet, Neptune, was discovered, and its position was quite in accordance with the prediction.(简介)

 

From the fact that planet Uranus was a bit pulled out of its normal orbit, some mathematicians logically reasoned the existence of a new planet, Neptune, and even precisely calculated its position according to Newton's theory of universal gravitation in 1845. One year later Neptune was discovered just around the predicted position.

 

哈雷彗星的发现

after thoroughly comparing several comet observation records, Halley eventually found the similarities of the periods of some records. He further induced that these records actually refer to a unique comet, Halley' comet, and predicted that the comet would appear again after another period of 76 years.(理论对实践的指导)

 

after several year's careful observation and thorough calculation, Halley predicted that the comet appeared in 1682 was periodic and it would return after 76 years in 1758. Halley passed away fifteen years ago before his prediction was confirmed.(个人的伟大难以被承认)

 

克隆

For instance, clone, one of the most astonishing and challenging biomedical techniques, is thought to be quite promising in gene savings. However, human cloning s is not only dangerous technically but also perilous to the morality and ethics, thus many ethicists, religious, political leaders, and others call for to banning human cloning for reproductive purposes and even any purpose. Nevertheless, some scientists, in spite of moral and ethical standards, insists on doing experiments on cloning humans stealthily.

 

The clone of human beings has been criticized by many scientists, politicians, and moralists, and even banned by some governments, for it is not only dangerous technically, but most importantly, is in defiance of our social morality. If the clone of human beings is carried out, our current moral systems may be overturned and thus the society would be in disorder.

 

心脏专家

For instance, a patient who suffers from heart disease may go to hospital for advice. If the physician who examines the patient has never met the illness before, he may be perplexed and ask for suggestion from a skillful doctor who is a cardiologist. It is possible that the cardiologist can find the key pathogeny at the first glance and give the correct treatment in a short time.

 

达尔文

The theory of evolution is one of the great intellectual revolutions of human history.

When Darwin published his famous On the Origin of Species by Means of Natural Selection, members of the religious community, as well as some scientific peers, were outraged and protested. However, Darwin's idea was eventually accepted and had drastically changed our perception of the world and of our place in it.(原文)

 

Hundreds of years ago, people were confused with the complexity of different species of the world, and believed that species were created by the mysterious God. However, Darwin did not believe so. After several years' study, he eventually demonstrated that species, however complex seemingly, all evolved by natural selection from simple and preliminary conditions. Darwin's theory revealed the simple principle of the world, and thus became a revolution of human beings.(复杂理论的简单性)

 

For example, when Darwin published his famous research results "Origin of Species", the book encountered lots of controversies. On the one hand, the members of the religious community, as well as some scientific peers, stubbornly held their belief that each organism and each adaptation was the work of the creator, and were outraged about Darwin’s ideas. On the other hand, some insightful scientists tended to acknowledge Darwin' researches. Eventually the theory of evolution defeated the traditional belief, and now is reverenced as one of the greatest intellectual revolutions of human history.(个人不被时代承认)

 

布鲁诺

In Bruno's era, the religious community was in charge of the social thinking, and many people believed that the earth was the center of the universe. Regardless of a long period of imprisonment, Bruno claimed that the universe is infinite, which outraged the religious community, and Bruno was sentenced to death eventually.

 

批评的作用(理证)

Receiving criticism can be a direct path to making yourself look good. Everyone is subject to it, from the person in the mailroom to the CEO of the organization. No one likes it, but everyone would be wise to hear it with an open mind. You can learn more about how to improve in your work and life through criticism than through many other channels.

 

Most criticism is intended to help you do your job, even live your life, better. It is meant to be useful and constructive. Some criticism is unfair, unjust and unkind. It is not meant to help you improve in any way; it is intended to hurt you, make you angry and wreck your day. Don't let it. The smart person treats all criticism in the same objective way, learning from it what he or she can and discarding the rest. The foolish person allows himself or herself to be manipulated into being angry or responding defensively, thereby losing whatever benefit he might have gained, and looking unprofessional and undignified in the process.

 

霍金Stephen Hawking

Hawking is certainly the most famous physicist in history who has not won the Nobel Prize. This is because the Swedish Royal Academy demands that an award-winning discovery must be supported by verifiable experimental or observational evidence. Hawking's work, to date, remains unproved.( 没有获得过诺贝尔奖,诺贝尔奖需要证实理论才可以。)

 

Hawking has made his reputation by investigating, in great detail, one particular set of problems: the singularity and horizons around black holes and at the beginning of time.

 

The idea that the universe had a specific time of origin has been philosophically resisted by some very distinguished scientists.(霍金受到过反对)

 

Hawking is probably the most famous living scientist. His book, A Brief History of Time, is available in paperback and has sold in excess of 10 million copies(传播自己的思想)

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