PREP 一题 求助解释

jessica1117

62. Because she knew many of the leaders of colonial America and the American Revolution personally, Mercy Otis Warren was continually at or near the center of political events from 1765 to 1789, a vantage point combining with her talent for writing to make her one of the most valuable historians of the ear

(a) a vantage point combining with her talent for writing to make

(b) a vantage point, when combined with her talent for writing, that made

(c) a vantage point that combined with her talent for writing, and it made

(d) and this vantage point, which combined with her talent for writing to make

(e) and this vantage point, combined with her talent for writing, made

 

A: combining用被动比较好

B: when combined状语从句应该在that以内，否则没有修饰对象

C: combined用被动，it没有指代对象

D: and后面句子不完整

E: correct

请问B为什么不对？解释啥意思？

谢谢！

xie999999999

B的when是个状语从句，但是它接着 a vantage point这个同位语，没有可修饰的动词。要是把它挪到that 后面就它就能修饰ｍａｄｅ了。

即使这样ｂ的表达也不consise。E读着多带劲啊。

jessica1117

非常清楚，隆重感谢！