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B用同位语本身没错.when combined with her talent for writing在句中只能做状语,不能修饰vantage.

正确用法应该是: a vantage point that, when combined with her talent for writing, made her one of the most valuable historians of the ear

----为什么这样修改后就正确了呢? 不解,NN请解答.

            

easy4meeeeee

a vantage point that, when combined with her talent for writing, made her one of the most valuable historians of the ear

a vantage point，when combined with her talent for writing, that made her one of the most valuable historians of the ear

两种都错

combined with ....在这里要做vantage point的定语，显然用when引导状语来修饰一个名词性的东西是不可以得

去掉that可以让这个同位语变成一个完整句子，这个时候才有用状语的可能

请拍砖

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