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A Five hundred million different species of living creatures have appeared on Earth, nearly 99 percent of them vanishing. vanishing修饰appearance of species,修饰错。
B Nearly 99 percent of five hundred million different species of living creatures that appeared on Earth have vanished.
从过去到现在出现的物种消失了,appear应该用完成时
C Vanished are nearly 99 percent of the five hundred million different species of living creatures that appeared on Earth.
句子一读就别扭:被消失的是一大串什么东西
D Of five hundred million different species of living creatures that have appeared on Earth, nearly 99 percent of them have vanished.
E Of the five hundred million different species of living creatures that have appeared on Earth, nearly 99 percent have vanished.
DE:首先the可有可无,曼哈顿里的人也是这么说的,有和没有差别不大。
E还原:nearly 99 percent of the five hundred...have vanished.
然而D还原:nearly 99 percent of them of the the five hundred...have vanished.重复,D真正错在这。
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