请教 GWD 12-4 (CD22)

fiddlelover

Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlof was the novelist who became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win the Nobel Prize for Literature.

 

A.   Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlof was the novelist who became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win

B.    She turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, and novelist Selma Lagerlof in 1909 became the first woman as well as the first Swedish writer that won

C.   Selma Lagerlof was a novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, and in 1909 she became the first woman in addition to the first Swedish writer winning

D.   A novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, Selma Lagerlof became in 1909 the first woman and also the first Swedish writer to win

E.    As novelist, Selma Lagerlof turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 becoming the first woman and also the first Swedish write that won

Answer: D.

What's wrong with C? Please help! Thanks in advance!

wawa1983

觉得这里用in addition to不大合适，用and连接平行的两个部分比较好

duanxj

Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlof was the novelist who became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win the Nobel Prize for Literature.

 

C.   Selma
Lagerlof was a novelist who turned away from literary realism to write
romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, and in 1909 she became the first woman in addition to the first Swedish writer winning

D.   A novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, Selma Lagerlof became in 1909 the first woman and also the first Swedish writer to win

我觉得C中in addition to 用的太过于文言，毕竟一个and 或者and  also就可以搞定。当然还有become the  first women  to win / winning的问题， 前者是习惯性搭配，我经常可以看到这样用。

最后，经验之谈，这种题，（把头衔作为一个分句先写到前面）往往是正确的。这样我认为很拽，我见过的类似的题目无一例外，没有一个正确答案是一个老老实实平实的句子。