[原创]再接再厉，第二篇 twe1

xiaolongxia

1. People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Nowadays, an increasing number of people attend college or university. Depending on personal experience, character type; different people may give different answer. From my point of view, there are three conspicuous reasons: career preparation, new experience, increased knowledge. 

First, career preparation is the major reason drive majority of people attend college. There is no doubt that, job market is more competitive than decades before. It is widely accept that university degree is essential to get a decent job. For instance, my uncle was turned down by every company due to lack of college degree. Frustrated by this experience, he made great effort to attend college. After graduation from a famous university, he managed to get a position in IBM Company. In a word, attending college or university is a short cut to decent job. 

Besides career preparation, many people attend college to experience new life. For most people, it is the first time to move into a new place. As for me, campus life is fascinating. I make lots of friends from all over the country, even some international students. We learn each other's culture, share our happiness and sorrow. In my spare time, I often take part in various clubs with friends.Campus provides not only valuable job opportunity but also invaluable friendship. 

People attend college to search for knowledge. With guides of experience tutor, students learn system knowledge in their major in high efficacy. Besides, they also develop personal capabilities. For example, they learn how to analyze a problem, how to find a solution and how express their view. College and university education promote people’s capability as well as tradition knowledge

 

 

In conclusion, attending college or university provides opportunity to promising job, fascinating life experience and development of knowledge and skill.

[此贴子已经被作者于2006-11-28 10:08:38编辑过]

xiaolongxia

早上起来写了第二篇，用时45分钟，超时好多阿。写完之后发现字数293，写少了得分影响大吗？

Joypan

字数如果不足对分数是有影响的。

xiaolongxia

请帮我点评一下作文好吗？

xiaolongxia

第一篇作文，写得很郁闷，记得当时你的点评是句子过于冗长，我在这方面作了改进，但是还是字数问题。