17:不理解为何作文怎么这么差?

mentulau

17分:不理解为何作文怎么这么差?GMAT AWA还得了4.5呢.请大家帮忙看看评语如何解决问题?

我从网上DOWN了个模板,就是广泛流传大家都在用的那两个,字数也够了,怎么就分数这么低呢?是模板的问题吗?

这周六要二战,着急啊.谢谢先啦

1\Writing based on reading and listening

 You responded to the task, relating the lecture to the reading, but your response indicates weaknesses such as

• an important idea or ideas may be missing, unclear, or inaccurate;
• there may be unclarity in how the lecture and the reading passage are related; and/or
• grammatical mistakes or vague/incorrect uses of words may make the writing difficult to understand.

2\Writing based on knowledge and experience

You expressed ideas with reasons, examples, and details, but your response indicated weaknesses such as

• you may not provide enough specific support and development for your main points;
• your ideas may be difficult to follow because of how you organize your essay or because of the language you use to connect your ideas; and/or
• grammatical mistakes or vague/incorrect uses of words may make the writing difficult to understand.

[此贴子已经被作者于2006-11-28 9:42:10编辑过]

skywalkerzrc

你看看og上的各档次文章就明白了，模版没有本质意义的