后天就考了,谁能帮忙看一下

Matrixrl

(Unlike many United States cities, where a river is no longer the focal point of urban life, the river in San Antonio) winds through the middle of the business district, and the River Walk, or Paseo del Rio, is the city's most popular attraction.

A...

B. Unlike the river in many cities in the United States, which is no longer the focal point of urban life, in San Antonio the river

C.Today the river in many cities in the United States is no longer the focal point of urban life, unlike San Antonio, where it

D. In few United cities today, a river is the focal point of urban life, but the river in San Antonio

E. No longer do many cities in the United States have a river as the focal point of urban life, but in San Antonio the river.

虽然我用排除法选对了E,可是我还是不知道这题最主要考什么,希望有谁知道的能够点拨一下,马上就考了,到现在还觉得语法掌握的不够....

Matrixrl

忘说了,这是gmatprep的题,现在prep的sc难度也不比gwd底啊

Matrixrl

没人睬我....

jiangyue_yue

我觉得可能是考倒装吧，好像说倒装总是优选项。（你是 财大的吗？我也是）

Matrixrl

是啊,考倒装?

原文没倒装可以随便改?

lxzjojo

个人认为这题考的是前后逻辑主语的对应和句式平行对称问题，我自己的分析如下，希望对LZ有所启发：

（Unlike many United States cities, where a river is no longer the focal point of urban life, the river in San Antonio) winds through the middle of the business district, and the River Walk, or Paseo del Rio, is the city's most popular attraction.

A...（many US cities和the river对应错误）

B. Unlike the river in many cities in the United States, which is no longer the focal point of urban life, in San Antonio the river（the river in...和in SA the river不对称）

C.Today the river in many cities in the United States is no longer the focal point of urban life, unlike San Antonio, where it（the river in many cities和SA对应错误）

D. In few United cities today, a river is the focal point of urban life, but the river in San Antonio（in few US cities和the river in SA对应错误）

E. No longer do many cities in the United States have a river as the focal point of urban life, but in San Antonio the river.（best）

晴天小狗

同意主要还是 比较概念对等原则

Matrixrl

谢谢,今天发寒热,希望明天好了,否则我就完了