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albertjerry

22.    Cardiopulmonary resuscitation should begin between one to four minutes after a cardiac arrest in order to be a success.
(A) Cardiopulmonary resuscitation should begin between one to four minutes after a cardiac arrest in order to be a success.
(B) Between one and four minutes after a cardiac arrest, cardiopulmonary resuscitation should begin to be successful.
(C) Successful cardiopulmonary resuscitation should be begun from one to four minutes after a cardiac arrest occurs.
(D) If it is to be successful, a cardiac arrest should be treated with cardiopulmonary resuscitation one to four minutes afterward.
(E) To be successful, cardiopulmonary resuscitation should begin within one to four minutes after a cardiac arrest.

我选的c ,我怎么感觉好像要被动啊,心肺复苏会自己开始吗,请指教

mjiehu

E.
A between...to
B should begin to be successful
C should be begun
D should be treated/one to four minutes afterward

albertjerry

我的意思是       为什么要用主动,而不用被动呢,从意思上讲,心肺复苏是不会自动开始的啊,有点晕

Mchao_l

我水平很低, 也不明白为什么选E, 希望有牛牛继续讲解.

felix2816

norm1 :"in order to" is less perfect than to.
2.active voice is desirable, and passive voice twisted the original meaning.
3,the effect of "between .....and" is less than that of "within 1 to four minutes".
so only E is approximate  one.

yzlinlin

对於这题的主被动我也有疑问，只是觉得E用主动好象念起来并不觉得拗口，相反比C的被动好象更顺口一些。

只是，我觉得这题其他各项错误可以如下分析：

A： between....to...; in order to 没有to 简洁；  而且in order to be a success 有直接修饰cardiac arrest之嫌，这一目的状语宜提前。

B： between ...and ...不如one to four... 简洁；更主要的是，该句句意被扭曲，变得逻辑关系不清。

C：这项最明显的错误是句子重心发生转移。

D： it 在句中指代 a cardiac arrest，句意成为a cardiac arrest is to be successful。

抛砖引玉，至於主被动，哪位NN给解释一下？

simona

begin应该不用被动也可表示心肺开始跳动的意思

大家经常说的class begins

不是说课被开始上。对吧

欢迎大家批评指正

ana9

agree

vivian_huang

以下是引用yzlinlin在2003-10-26 3:43:00的发言：
对於这题的主被动我也有疑问，只是觉得E用主动好象念起来并不觉得拗口，相反比C的被动好象更顺口一些。

只是，我觉得这题其他各项错误可以如下分析：

A： between....to...; in order to 没有to 简洁；  而且in order to be a success 有直接修饰cardiac arrest之嫌，这一目的状语宜提前。

B： between ...and ...不如one to four... 简洁；更主要的是，该句句意被扭曲，变得逻辑关系不清。

C：这项最明显的错误是句子重心发生转移。

D： it 在句中指代 a cardiac arrest，句意成为a cardiac arrest is to be successful。

抛砖引玉，至於主被动，哪位NN给解释一下？

跟贴汇总一下：

201 Cardiopulmonary resuscitation should begin between one to four minutes after a cardiac arrest in order to be a success.[目的状语修饰全局，有直接修饰cardiac arrest的歧义]

(A) Cardiopulmonary resuscitation should begin between one to four minutes after a cardiac arrest in order to be a success.[错误使用between …to搭配]

(B) Between one and four minutes after a cardiac arrest, cardiopulmonary resuscitation should begin to be successful.[不符合使用习惯，between。。。and破坏逻辑意思]

(C) Successful cardiopulmonary resuscitation should be begun from one to four minutes after a cardiac arrest occurs.[should +be+done 错]==〉没有看出C选项怎么破坏原文句子重心，那位能指点一下啊？

(D) If it is to be successful, a cardiac arrest should be treated with cardiopulmonary resuscitation one to four minutes afterward.[句首的条件从句罗嗦，]（E）

(E) To be successful, cardiopulmonary resuscitation should begin within one to four minutes after a cardiac arrest.

sicivi

汇总的很好！