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AI的模板只是对shmilyqiqi稍加了改动，事实证明如果时间太紧，可以用牛人的模板，但保守一些总要做一些改动。 _________? To some extent, I agree with the author’s general assertion that________. However, the author unnecessarily extends this broad assertion to an irreversible extreme while neglecting some other crucial factors which may greatly influence the issue. All in all, my points of agreement and contention with the author involve the fundamental/case-by-case analysis as discussed below. On the one hand, I agree that this assertion, though suffering from some inevitable drawbacks, nourishes some merits in the light of common sense and experience in daily life. Accordingly, it is partially indisputable. After all, _______. Even if,__________. In other words_________. One could effortlessly imagine the scenario,______ Moreover,___________. Take____ for example. All these evidence demonstrates beyond any doubt that_____. On the other hand, realizing that a more rational and accurate judgment need to incorporate different aspects of the issue as adequately as possible, I have to point out that the author overstates ______’s comparative significance, and fail to take into account other essential factors. Firstly, the author overlooked_____________, that is to say,____________. Secondly, ________, which might has been noticed by people. Hence, I tend to concede that in some certain circumstances the practice that______ is partially inappropriate In sum, seldom can other issues be more complicated than issue about__________. Consequently, judgment can only be drawn in a subjective way rather than in objective and definite way. And so different are the personal experiences, emotional concerns and personalities among people that thousand individuals might maintain thousand opinions. As to me, _______ AA的模板参考的比较多，是以前考gre时做的，又结合gmat作文题特点改的。 开头：只用重复结论。节省时间。 Based on various cited facts, the author concludes that______. Close scrutiny of each of the facts, however, reveals that none of them lend credible support to the conclusion. The reasoning of the argument is problematic in several aspects. 结尾：这样起到了总括全文，节省了再想理由的时间，字数也不少，句式也有变化。 In conclusion, such logic flaws as （implicit casual relationship, tenuous assumption，doubtable survey，false analogy and hasty generalization）文中用到哪种错误就写哪种 make the argument invalid and unpersuasive. To solidify the conclusion, the author should provide concrete evidence as well as rule out other alternative situations. Only with more convincing evidence could this argument become more than just an emotional appeal. 一、implicit casual relationship 前因后果： The author assumes that a____ cause b_____. The reasoning line is that because a___ happen before b , the former caused the latter. But the reasoning is premature unless other possible causal explanations have been considered and ruled out. Therefore, any decision aimed at addressing the problem must be based on more thorough investigation to gather sufficient data in order to narrow down and locate the actual cause of the problem. 因果无关 Based on a correlation between……and……, the arguer concludes that the latter is attributable, at least partly, to the former. This observed phenomenon, actually, says little more than that these two events are synchronic to each other and that is all. That is to say, _____do not necessarily result from ____. In all likelihood…… It is also entirely possible that……Another possibility is that____ If any alternative explanation is the case, the conclusion would lack any merit of whatsoever. 二、错误类比：false analogy Rested on the assumption that a is similar to b_____in all aspects, the author conclude that____. Yet the problem is that the author fails to realize that situations are not similar enough to justify the analogical deduction. a___ and b , actually, bear numerous differences. For example________. Accordingly, b_____ is unlikely to experience the same consequence if it adopts a___'s strategies. 三、无理假设：tenuous assumption the author rests on a dubious assumption that____. However, no further information and specifics are provided to bolster this assumption and to establish the correlation. As a matter of fact, it is quite likely that___. For example, imagine that___ .Therefore, without further exploring the correlations between a___ and b___, the argument cannot safely jump to the conclusion as it states. 四、急于概括hasty generalization The author commits a fallacy of hasty generalization. Even if …, it does not follow that…It is highly possible other factors may have contributed to …For instance,…. Besides, there is no guarantee that… Without ruling out these and other possible factors, the author cannot confidently conclude that… 特殊几类， 成本问题 There is no thorough cost-benefit analysis in the argument. If the increase of cost overweighs that of benefits…will fall in trouble of losing rather than gaining money. Also, the author neglects contingencies such as labor and material costs, legislative moves, competition, market changes, and the national or international cycle , all of which can lead to the dropping profit. 非此即彼： The author unfairly assumes that a reader must make a either-or choice. However, the argument fails to rule out the possibility that adjusting a___ and b___ might produce better results. Additionally, most effective solution might include a complex of other factors. For example_____. In any event, the author provides no justification for the mutually exclusive choice imposed on the reader. 必要性： The author unfairly assumes that b____ was determined solely by a___. While a___ is seemingly important factor in determining b____, it is hardly the only or even necessarily required element. This assumption overlooks other crucial criteria in determining b____--such as______. Without accounting for these potential factors, the author concludes too hastily that___ is the best way to achieve goals. 充要性： The author's solution rests on the assumption that a____ is sufficient to give birth to the desired goals. However, if it turns out that b_____ is due to a combination of factors, some of which remain unchanged in the future, such as _____, only a______ might have no impact on b____. 五、不明调查doubtable survey The survey upon which the argument relies is too vague to warrant the argument. Firstly, secondly, thirdly 1. 样本选取 Samples for the survey are of little statistical reliability, because there is no reason to believe that the data drawn from ..... is representative of the entire……. If the subjects are only limited to a certain city or geographic region, the results of the survey will be unconvincing. So, without additional samples from diverse geographic locations, I cannot accept the author’s sweeping generalization about 2. 方法不对 Information is lacking that how the survey is responded. Without such critical information, it is impossible to assess the validity/reliability of the survey’s results and let alone to make an informed recommendation. 从以下每一小类中选出一两种 （For example, if 200 employees were surveyed but only 2 responded, the conclusion would be highly suspect. Whether the respondents are forthright when answering the questions? The survey/poll’s responses must be truthful/accurate/credible. Otherwise, the information gained from the survey is tainted and unreliable. If the survey is conducted by the manager, it will be unconvincing. Because the manager might have fabricated the reports so that____. we are not informed whether responses are anonymous or even confidential. If not, then respondents might have provided what they believe their superiors would approve of, regardless of whether the responses were truthful.) Therefore, any decision aimed at addressing the problem of must be based on more thorough investigation to gather sufficient data in order to narrow down and locate the actual causes of the problem 以我考过gre、gmat作文的经历来看，背范文背句子投入产出比很低。当然如果时间宽裕确实想提高英语水平，确实需要背大量的好段子。在我看来，开始的时候，范文不用多看，各5篇就足够了。主要明白作文套路，明白aa中的主要逻辑错误。 接下来，看前人的模板，做出自己的模板，无论你稍加修改也好，还是大动结构，必须要有一个自己的做的过程，这对成功运用模板是很重要的。先说一下，模板的重要性，模板是一个投入产出比最大的方法，当然前提是运用模板的方法得当。再说模板的运用，做的过程，一定要做的通用性强，为运用打基础。我考gre作文时，aa的模板做了7页，模考时都不知道怎么套，更别提在考场上了。 接下来，背模板，套用模板。这个过程非常重要，不要觉得模板有了，把题目大概看看，错误考试很容易找出来，直接一套完事大吉，那是不可能的。至少要练个四五篇，把每个类型的逻辑错误模板怎么套搞明白。当然这个过程有时你会发现自己的模板不太灵活，这时就要修改。 最后，敲模板，总之是越熟越好，尽量不要有错字。我考gre时根本想不起来模板了。因为我只是大概背了背，怎么看自己的模板怎么做的全面，光顾陶醉了。上了考场就傻了。我给自己的要求只敲200多字的模板至多12分钟敲完，开始练不行，别着急，后来慢慢的就很快了，这样有足够的时间想for example的内容，而通常这部分内容越多越容易得高分，并且有模板字数的保证分怎么也不会太低。 再说题库，必须要看一遍，至少生词要都查出来吧。我还把怪癖题的范文找出来大概看了看，只看大概意思。这样做到心中有数，即使遇到变态题，大概也能扯上几句。模板在，字数在，分数就在。当然我没有遇到变态题，所以有点觉得这部分浪费时间，不过反正题库大概看了半天，在去北京的路上把变态文章看了看。不过我建议这部分要搞一搞，毕竟求个踏实。 最后唠叨一句，先把开头结尾打出来，是最正确的方法，防止时间不够，没有结尾被狠减分。 关键词：模板熟，错字少，字数够，心里踏实
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