TTGWD17-18好心人告诉我A 错在哪了呢??

raikey

以下是引用camuer在2006-10-7 14:56:00的发言：

a错在and 后面不能再有 because，and前后应该是两个名词结构，删除because后还得删除charcoal使replaced成为过去分词作定语，a才算对

b错在 in addition to 后面的名词结构从语义上说是主要的，它前面的名词结构是修饰in addition to 后面的名词结构；而整个句子的宾语“the replacement of charcoal by coal for the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore” 在逻辑上是主要的，如此便是矛盾

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7.	in addition to, as well as; besides

如此，Over the course of the eighteenth century a tripling in the average output of ironwork was due to the replacement of charcoal by coal for the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore, as well as several improvements in blowing machinery.　还有什么错吗？

请高人指点一二！

raikey

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uvoice

DING

qqort

以下是引用raikey在2007-5-26 18:38:00的发言：

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7.	in addition to, as well as; besides

如此，Over the course of the eighteenth century a tripling in the average output of ironwork was due to the replacement of charcoal by coal for the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore, as well as several improvements in blowing machinery.　还有什么错吗？

请高人指点一下

觉得如果用as well as的话，前面不应该用逗号，A as well as B， 用了逗号之后整个句子貌似被分开了，逻辑上出现问题。

个人看法，大家探讨一下哈。。。

qqort

回楼主的问题，A中的and后面不应该加because之类的呀，会造成不平衡的结构，as a result of A and B就可以了吧？再说用了and because之后读起来好像又在讲第二件事了，逻辑歧异啊。。。

uvoice

ding

chanx_ceci

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icando0512

because后面是要跟完整句子的.because和because of用法完全不同,as a result of和because of的地位是一样的

wsdoll

???

A /C

maomao521

到底结论是啥呀？